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Acephaly. -- Cyanide, 20:12:12 01/21/04 Wed
Acephaly.

Restricted to adults' 18 years and over. Contains offensive language, depictions of torture, violence and other material that may cause offense.

This story contains some dialogue lifted from the LFN series and one line stolen from the movie "Point of no return."

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Short introduction. -- Cyanide, 20:19:15 01/21/04 Wed
- Hey, Cyanide -- Shanola, 19:37:18 01/22/04 Thu
Prologue. (R18) -- Cyanide, 12:30:43 01/22/04 Thu
Chapter One. (R18) -- Cyanide, 12:32:24 01/22/04 Thu
Chapter Two. (R18) -- Cyanide, 12:34:34 01/22/04 Thu
Chapter Three. (R18) -- Cyanide, 12:36:43 01/22/04 Thu
Chapter Four. (R18) -- Cyanide, 12:42:27 01/22/04 Thu
Chapter Five. (R18) -- Cyanide, 13:34:12 01/22/04 Thu
Chapter Six. (R18) -- Cyanide, 13:36:51 01/22/04 Thu
- Okay, a couple of things... -- Shanola, 22:51:19 01/25/04 Sun
  - Well then...(r) -- Cyanide, 15:57:47 02/02/04 Mon
  - Ooops....(r) -- Cyanide, 16:04:52 02/02/04 Mon
Chapter Seven. (R18) -- Cyanide, 14:04:33 02/01/04 Sun
- Comments inside. -- Shanola, 22:19:09 02/01/04 Sun
  - Ok. (r) -- Cyanide, 16:19:29 02/02/04 Mon
    - Hmm... -- Shanola, 20:15:36 02/02/04 Mon
      - Warning rambling ahead...(r) -- Cyanide, 14:25:41 02/03/04 Tue
        
        Okay. And hey... -- Shanola, 20:13:53 02/03/04 Tue
Chapter Eight. (R18) -- Cyanide., 13:26:26 02/02/04 Mon
Chapter Nine. (R18) -- Cyanide, 13:28:42 02/02/04 Mon
Chapter Ten. (R18) -- Cyanide, 13:39:50 02/02/04 Mon
Chapter Eleven - P1(R18) -- Cyanide, 14:07:33 02/02/04 Mon
Chapter Eleven - P2(R18) -- Cyanide, 14:12:38 02/02/04 Mon
Epilogue. (R18) -- Cyanide, 14:37:12 02/02/04 Mon

Newish Story -- Madison, 14:23:50 01/10/04 Sat
I'm posting this on SB2 as well, but I'm in need of some feedback. Please, be cruel to be kind if needed. Thanks heaps!

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Untitled 1-3 -- Madison, 14:24:55 01/10/04 Sat
Newish Story 4 -- Madison, 16:35:59 01/10/04 Sat
- Hey there Madison...(r) -- Genevieve, 18:26:13 01/12/04 Mon
  - Doesn't matter-- I'm checking both (NT) -- Madison, 18:59:40 01/12/04 Mon
pt 4 revamp -- Madison, 19:01:12 01/12/04 Mon
part 5 -- Madison, 19:03:21 01/12/04 Mon
- I'm going to make a few general comments real fast. -- Shanola, 20:51:02 01/16/04 Fri
  - Can I mention.... -- Madison, 07:03:34 01/17/04 Sat
    - Hmm... -- Shanola, 18:22:15 01/17/04 Sat
      - Re: Hmm... -- Madison, 09:56:33 01/18/04 Sun
Newish Story 1-3 edited -- Madison, 21:06:22 01/19/04 Mon
- Okay, a hard beta on parts 1-2. -- Shanola, 20:49:46 01/20/04 Tue
Newish Story 4-5 edited -- Madison, 21:07:45 01/19/04 Mon
- Hard Beta on 4-5 -- Shanola, 21:35:30 01/20/04 Tue

Another, shorter, test -- Shanola, 20:34:57 11/24/03 Mon
Hello, all.

For years there has been a viscious rumour circulating that there would be a 'Zine called Seeing the Invisible published. Well, yeah. Somewhat belated, and still accepting last minute submissions:

ref="http://www.lfnresource.net/challenge/zine/invisible.html")Seeing the Invisible<(/a>)

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