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Date Posted: 11:56:53 09/24/04 Fri
Author: Ângela Vitorino
Subject: Re: Task 2
In reply to: Aparecida S.SIlva 's message, "Re: Task 2" on 07:33:38 09/20/04 Mon

To: Aparecida

I like your work . As you asked me, please see the following changes in structure as suggestions, OK?
1st paragraph -2nd line - .. and the tactical tool for success (cut “the” before tool)
6th line – skillful way instead of skifull
2nd paragraph- 1st line – Regarding to the studies of languages, in a more specific way
6th paragraph – 2nd line – For this, he has to establish (cut “to happen”)
5th line – A good strategy may be the training of his memory as soon as …
8th paragraph – 1st line - … knowledge. This strategy is mostly related to listening …
l0th paragraph – 1st line – It is how the student can lower his anxiety
llth paragraph – 1st line - …latter, it is related (cut “and”)
3rd line - … understanding . But it seems that the best one is the attempt of communicating and trying to keep calm.

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  • Re: Task 2 -- Maria Tereza, 14:21:13 09/24/04 Fri
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