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] Date Posted: 16/02/07 23:16 ok yeah its me again, first im not here for ages now i cant stop writing!! anyway recently i have been writing some poems. After a few attempts to write some on here a while back lol. So I hope its ok but i thought i would post 3 of them on here. No real reason why, just wanted to share a bit of me i guess. This one i wrote after reading lots of blogs on my yahoo pages about people who in my opinion "overly" worshipped some kind of faith or religion. Dont get me wrong i love my pagan faith whole heartedly, but sometimes i wonder if people use their faith as an excuse for things that have gone wrong instead of using the experience to turn it into something positive.. anyway..... thats this one. Theres nothing left for me to say that hasnt been said anyway. You search for truth in what has past, Its just a phase, it will not last. The gods and heathens from our shores You grasp at them with razored claws. Disect and study, then rip to shreds Make effigies of their once formed heads. and why! because nothing really changed Your minds while occupied, or re-arranged Know no more or less than from the start About the depths of soul or heart Whatever gods that walked before Are laughing at you now for sure. Theres no god here to wipe my brow So I will not kneel or serve or bow My faith is not in that of man Truth and justice are my clan You put your gods on lofty perch's Then pray to them in glades or church's Send them all those tears you've cried But have you ever seen one by your side? So dont push your worries on an deity Or blame them for your lack of destiny The gods arnt here to tell you what to do This is your life its up to you. *************************************** this was like writing lots of little affirmations while i was meditating. Open my eyes, open my heart Cleanse me with a wave from the sea Open my mind, open my soul So that I may clearly see. Show me the path, show me the way Illuminate my meaning Show me love, show me beauty So that i can continue this feeling Hold me close, hold me tight Let me rest in your embrace Hold my heart, hold my soul Tenderly stroke my face. Bless me with wisdom, Bless me with grace So I can find the strength inside Bless me with courage, bless me with honour So that I may walk with pride Help me to remember, to understand that though time spans eternity I will walk through the forest of life, and know that I am all that I need. ************************************** ok one more.. hope ya not fallen asleep yet!! The Sands of Time The familiar feeling unknown slips through fingers like sands of time It comes, it goes, feelings flow without reason or with out rhyme The never ending feeling of time Fast as a race, hearts pace Dont know where to draw the line It comes, it goes, feeling flow Forever lost in a world sublime That never ending feeling of time Its quick and its slow, but where does it go Oh strange adversary of my mine each second the same, without refrain each day synchronicity divine Oh that never ending feeling of time Trapped in its world sublime ************************ ok ermm yeah thats me done. [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Ash [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 17/02/07 13:39 Lol, god, you can't just release an anthology, you have to post them online! lol. They are good. I haven't done a poem in ages, actually I think the last one was a bit erm...violent to write here. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: zenwind [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 17/02/07 14:41 Hi Jade I enjoyed you poetry. I love poetry and write haiku as part of meditation. namaste zenwind [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: whitewolf [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 17/02/07 14:48 And why have you not been submitting your poetry for the GG Library or Poetry competitions young lady? :) Thanks for sharing Jade! Lovely work (may I add it to the GG Library?) [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: jade [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 17/02/07 22:52 lol ash.. you violent never... mail me soon miss you moaning like a **** in my inbox. yes whitewolf that would be lovely of you thanks! (chuffed now) worked quite hard to attempt to try and be more expressive,, but at the end of the day im just a simple rhymer lol. kinda suits me. so thankyouuu [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Ash [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18/02/07 13:07 The last poem I made up was an anti-valentines one. "Roses are red Violets are blue. I'd like to pull out a knife, and ram it in you." lol. I haven't time for poetry or prose atm. I will email you...one day! It's just atm i have brief moments I can post on forums before the burden or work falls back onto my shoulders! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: gaiangrub [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18/02/07 4:37 wow Jade! your first poem seems innately human and if i may say so full of excellent advice and the third one really struck me with its feeling of truth on a subject i feel is beyond my minds comprehension !!(at this time)!! if this all sounds like a bunch of maniacal meandering well it is- but i mean to honor your work just so ya know luvv-gg [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: jade [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18/02/07 9:42 aww thanks thats really nice of you. Ive written ermm wow near on 200 poems in the last year lol I have always been quite "wordy" I tried to learn the correct "format" for poetry writing, stanzas and all that stuff, but it just didnt fit or feel right. SO i just continue to waffle off the top of my head like that instead. but lovely comments so thankyou v much. jade [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Dragonlady [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18/02/07 11:30 Jade - they are lovely poems. Nice to find someone else who likes rhyming too :-)Format is irrelevant - write from the heart and you will never go far wrong. Dragonlady [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: newy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18/02/07 13:42 Hi folk Hi Jade On a bit of a downer at the moment and your poems really got to me (in a nice way), sound very much like what im feeling. Wish I could get rid of this feeling. ASH Really love your poem....... Newy HUGS and BLESSINGS to all. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: jade [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18/02/07 13:45 lmao ash.. aww you ole romantic you. Hello Newy... im sorry your feeling down. I tend to write a lot when im feeling emotional. poetry is a good way of expressing how you feel inside. Maybe you could write something?? much love jade [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Dragonlady [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18/02/07 14:34 That is a really good idea Newy, why dont you have a go and just let your feeling pour out from inside. It doesn't matter if it rhymes or doesn't rhyme or even if it makes sense to anyone other than you. Just write and sometimes by just doing that you can exorcise the feelings and feel a little better. (((((hugs)))) Dragonlady [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Ash [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19/02/07 14:19 Lol, yes, my poem is great. It's inspired by the stalkers who stalk me around campus. Weird girls. I agree with the idea that if it's from the heart, all else is irrelevant. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: jade [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19/02/07 17:43 stalkers... girls lololol oh i say do spill the beans then will ya!! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: sam spaniel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 20/02/07 20:16 what beautiful poems.... do keep them coming!!! love sam x [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: jade [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 20/02/07 20:20 thanks S.Spaniel thats really nice of you. and its given me a lot of encouragement putting them in here. so thanks all. mwah x [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |