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Date Posted: 21:55:42 06/15/08 Sun
Author: kate
Subject: That was a lovely read. Very sweet.
In reply to: . 's message, "Fix" on 19:27:34 06/15/08 Sun


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[> Wow, this is great!! I'm impressed all around ... (inside) -- Teacup, 23:27:46 06/15/08 Sun [1]

One of my favorite things was Mac's examination of the cereals and all the associations that led back to thoughts of Harm and Renee. Very creative!

Other things I loved:
- The 'fix' theme for each of them, which I took to mean not only an addiction to each other, but a 'fix' in their relationship;
- The "Going to the Chapel" cell phone ring for Renee (a good detail about a secondary character showing depth in the story - plus, I found it amusing);
- The emotions - I felt their pain even though I knew it was all a misunderstanding;
- The use of all the challenge lines in an exceptional manner that was not predictable from the get-go, and was true to both the prompts and Mac/Harm in this story.

My only complaint is ... the back-rub scene, BECAUSE my latest fic has a back-rub scene (that is probably not as good as this one), and now I have to decide if I want to delay its posting. (sigh) Oh well.

Great job!
(Oh, and my author guess: keru)


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