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Subject: Tears

Author:
Darkerside of light

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Date Posted: 09:01:56 11/25/07 Sun

Tears

Trying so hard not to cry
Trying so hard
Game of poker
Flick over the card
What can I see angel of death or just a joker

And the tears run
The tears run
They just run
Back where it all begun
The tears run
For fuck sake
What have I done?
Mistake
We all make
And the tears run
They run
Oh for fuck sake

Easier to write
Not so to fight
My words rattle into the night
Give me the devil
Because the deep blue sea
Looking ugly to me

And the tears run
They just run
Spin the barrel
To my head you made me place a gun
And the tears run
They run
Guilty that�s me
Taken what I can take
Now I just wait
And the tears run
They just
Run
Take
Oh for fuck sake!

DSL

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[> Subject: Re: Tears
Author: Janel [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 22:17:47 11/26/07 Mon Powewfully expressed Dsl, can see and feel the tears.

[> [> Subject: Re: Tears
Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 03:13:34 11/28/07 Wed Hi Janel this poem was inspired by that point you feel that emotion of just before the tears start to flow you just know there coming or the first thing you know is the feeling the tears leave as they run down your face. cheers DSL

[> Subject: Re: Tears
Author: andy [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 10:03:22 11/27/07 Tue DSL, The rhythm of your poem is just outstanding! I voiced it twice sitting here and felt its strength come alive. Loving what you bring to the Motel! thanks, andy

[> [> Subject: Re: Tears
Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 03:15:37 11/28/07 Wed Hi Andy thanking you for the encouragement I will recite this one at the first chance I get DSL

[> Subject: Re: Tears
Author: thesongman [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 15:04:55 11/28/07 Wed DSL I felt this one very strongly. Excellent. Bill

[> [> Subject: Re: Tears
Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 08:25:23 11/29/07 Thu Good to see ya Bill and I'm pleased you got yourself a job I know you haven't had it easy cheers DSL

[> Subject: Re: Tears
Author: Stephanie [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 17:46:46 11/28/07 Wed ((DSL)) A great write and it flows effortlessly down the page. smile It's great reading you here. hugs I look forward to more from you.

[> [> Subject: Re: Tears
Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 08:28:12 11/29/07 Thu Hi Stephanie so pleased to make another new friend I enjoyed your pen much too DSL

[> Subject: Re: Tears
Author: Sasha [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 21:17:41 11/29/07 Thu Quote: ________________ Easier to write Not so to fight ________________ ~ sometimes it's just like that, isn't it, Mark... feeling the pain that courses and pulses through this piece a powerful piece...well done, dear one warm hugs Sash xx .

[> [> Subject: Re: Tears
Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 04:25:15 11/30/07 Fri I can hear myself cry in this one cheers Sash DSL