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Subject: Softly burns the candle.


Author:
Paul
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Date Posted: 21:52:26 11/23/07 Fri
Author Host/IP: 222.152.103.105

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Amidst the pain of the crumbling,
Where all the work seemed for nothing,
I felt a heart breaking,
It felt like my own,
Tears were shed without denial,
Rugs pulled out from under new shoes,
Just when the feet seemed to be stable,
The world stopped spinning for a time,
The hurt, bubbling like lava,
Rising through her core, searing, tearing,
Yet I felt sick in unison.
We talked until the sun rose,
Laughing at the situation as only we could,
Imagining the Lard, melting, dripping,
Onto the flames of eternal damnation,
Burning the walls of crumbling stone,
As the Judas returned to lick arse,
Then curl up on the master’s lap…..
Yet somehow we smiled,
There would be roses in our garden next year,
Watered with hope and love,
There was a horizon beckoning,
A new room, more beautiful than ever,
That drew her back, time after time,
Then as we drifted in the endless hours,
Our world was once more illuminated,
Flickering hope and destiny on our faces,
No more need for pale pink walls,
Softly burns the candle,
Our never ending beacon of hope.

© Paul Osborne 2007.


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andy
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Date Posted: 21:59:18 11/23/07 Fri
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I need not say more. You said it all and to have you as a friend is a blessing to anyone lucky enough to sit in that seat.

thanks,
andy


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Paul
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Date Posted: 21:59:56 11/23/07 Fri
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Andy, Thank you so much for this, I know mine will not be the only heart lifted by this. As for your statement? Consider yourself blessed MY FRIEND.

Peace, hope and love,

Paul.


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Sasha
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Date Posted: 22:00:38 11/23/07 Fri
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~ awwwwww.....and THIS, Paulie Oz, is one of the many reasons why I love you...

thank you for this, and for YOU!!!!

you really are a talented man...


*kiwi hugs*


Sash xx




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Mireille
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Date Posted: 22:01:30 11/23/07 Fri
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Awesome !! can't say much more.


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Darkerside of Light
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Date Posted: 22:11:56 11/23/07 Fri
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the pen did write mighty feeling this one

DSL


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Jessica
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Date Posted: 22:12:43 11/23/07 Fri
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"There would be roses in our garden this year."

Paul, you are such an amazingly talented poet, and this is a lovely, heartbreaking showcase of that talent. I love reading you!

Namaste,

Jess


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Sasha
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Date Posted: 04:11:00 11/24/07 Sat
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~ I just had to come back to this one...

(((((((((((Paulie))))))))))))

thank you for You!!!

*love 'n' kiwi hugs*

Sash xx



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Date Posted: 22:20:01 11/25/07 Sun
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paul, way to let it bleed, in a most beautiful and blessed way.

you *are* a top notch friend. and your pen has the most wonderful fire in it. :)

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