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Subject: Blue Heat


Author:
Dpillath
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Date Posted: 01:44:23 11/23/07 Fri
Author Host/IP: 222.152.103.105

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When stars
For You, Miria, burn
You gift the Infinite
In turn.
When night sky hues
In stars appear,
Their lights
Reflect your
Endless mirror.

She woos the heights
Of pillared Space
Twinkling with thoughts
That line Her Face.
Waves of expression
Stretch - expand
Beyond distance
Galactic - Grand.

She gazes back
Rigel appears
'Hind eyes
Igniting in the mirror -
Mother of Midnight
Shines your fire
As hottest stars
Sigh and expire.

Blue heat waves
Hottest lightning fall
Reflecting knowledge
Of the All.
Contrasting voids
Of blinding gleams
Become Her words -
Ecstatic dreams.

The fount beneath
Your eyes is right -
The body of most
Brilliant light.
Speak of Her sway -
Come, stars' embrace!
With the mystic grin
That spans Her face!

Deep in Her Knowing
Love can see
Face to face
The Mystery.
This vision chimes
With waves so whole
Your blue heat
Burns up in Her Soul.





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[> Subject: Re: Blue Heat


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 01:45:30 11/23/07 Fri
Author Host/IP: 222.152.103.105

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~ I'll be back to re-read this one in my morning,

but I just wanted to let you know I'd stopped by...

I love your imagery here, David....well done, hon

*hugs*

Sash xx





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[> Subject: Re: Blue Heat


Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 01:51:40 11/23/07 Fri
Author Host/IP: 222.152.103.105

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The fount beneath
Your eyes is right -
The body of most
Brilliant light.
Speak of Her sway -
Come, stars' embrace!
With the mystic grin
That spans Her face!


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Your poem is both touching and well crafted.

It sings of love, beauty, and grace.

Nice work David!

thanks,
andy



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[> Subject: Re: Blue Heat


Author:
Mireille
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Date Posted: 01:52:18 11/23/07 Fri
Author Host/IP: 222.152.103.105

Nice and sweet lines about love and some dedication.
A much pleasant read, thank you.

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[> Subject: Re: Blue Heat


Author:
Paul
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Date Posted: 01:53:01 11/23/07 Fri
Author Host/IP: 222.152.103.105



David,

As always you do not disappoint the reader. This is a plush write that held me to the end.Your voice is unique my friend.

Peace and hope,

Paul

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[> Subject: Re: Blue Heat


Author:
dpillath
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Date Posted: 01:53:49 11/23/07 Fri
Author Host/IP: 222.152.103.105




aww thanks so much paul for encouraging words.

and i am glad to make your day more pleasant, mireille!

thanks for positive comments andy.

and compliments, sasha!

have a good day everyone! :)

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[> Subject: Re: Blue Heat


Author:
Darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 01:54:40 11/23/07 Fri
Author Host/IP: 217.42.170.5

This pen just flows from image image breath taking

DSL

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[> Subject: Re: Blue Heat


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 04:07:50 11/24/07 Sat
Author Host/IP: 222.152.103.105



Quote:
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Speak of Her sway -
Come, stars' embrace!
With the mystic grin
That spans Her face!
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~ I just had to come back to this one, David

and I'm so glad I did...
this one speaks to me of our Mother Moon
you paint with an artist's brush, my talented friend

*hugs*

Sash xx



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[> Subject: Re: Blue Heat


Author:
Tiggs
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Date Posted: 19:59:24 11/25/07 Sun
Author Host/IP: 64.136.26.225

pertiful ;)

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[> Subject: Re: Blue Heat


Author:
Christine
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Date Posted: 20:38:38 11/25/07 Sun
Author Host/IP: 76.202.213.17


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[> Subject: Re: Blue Heat


Author:
Christine
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Date Posted: 20:39:52 11/25/07 Sun
Author Host/IP: 76.202.213.17

"Deep in Her Knowing
Love can see
Face to face
The Mystery.
This vision chimes
With waves so whole
Your blue heat
Burns up in Her Soul."

Read this first in the Intro Hall and still think Earthen....and still beautiful!

~Hugs~

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