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] Date Posted: 00:16:28 01/02/08 Wed Glass panes divide the trees and sky in separate rectangles. Strains of a sitar reverberate, forming labyrinth of octaves Putting away the wall clock from my view, you take with me through the channels in floor design, hovering over flowers on my curtain. Outside, daylight and darkness change their shifts a tabla comes alive. We glide along ripples of high and low in quiet hours. [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 05:50:19 01/02/08 Wed Glass panes divide the trees and sky in separate rectangles. Strains of a sitar reverberate, forming labyrinth of octaves Putting away the wall clock from my view, you take me through the channels in floor design, hovering over flowers on my curtains. Outside, daylight and darkness shift a tabla comes alive. We glide along ripples of high and low in quiet hours. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: tcn [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 10:13:57 01/02/08 Wed I love the rhythm and the beauty of the tempo in this piece. Gorgeous imagery, an outstanding write! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Jess [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 10:43:14 01/02/08 Wed I haven't been around much of late, so I've been catching up with everything, and alot of you. I like your cadences, and you have a wonderful way of re-imagining ordinary images. I like it! Jess [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13:36:23 01/02/08 Wed "Outside, daylight and darkness shift" ~ love that! we are so lucky to have so much wonderful poetry to read here everyday everybody here gifts the M3 with the magic of their poetic voice *hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:00:27 01/02/08 Wed Beautifully soft Arun, I love it much. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:00:33 01/02/08 Wed Thanks TCN, Jess and Sasha. Cheers. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:24:32 01/11/08 Fri  Read of the Day 11th January, 2008 Chosen by Janel CONGRATUATIONS on this honor, dear Arunansu your poem now has the ROTD spotlight in MUSE MONGERS READ OF THE DAY!!!  *hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:34:39 01/11/08 Fri Congratulations on the ROTD award. Another worthy poem. I'm beginning to expect one a day from you. LOL Much deserved! best, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Good Knight [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:00:53 01/11/08 Fri congratulations deserved my friend great read [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 22:24:53 01/11/08 Fri Thanks Sasha, Andy , Good Knight. I feel great. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |