Re: The Tropics of Cancer and Capricorn -- The Poetry Parlour

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Subject: Re: The Tropics of Cancer and Capricorn

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Lily

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Date Posted: 21:33:30 01/02/08 Wed
In reply to: Jess 's message, "The Tropics of Cancer and Capricorn" on 10:58:57 01/02/08 Wed

'But though the air is lurid and lush, the core of us is still frozen.'

this is a glorious write, fullbrimming of elemental emotion.. goodbyes are never easy. i very much enjoyed your Tropics Jess - sestina style..

~Lily

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Author: andy [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 22:04:05 01/02/08 Wed Jess, Read this twice earlier (and of course before in the other forum). I think it works much better without the constraints you were trying to achieve earlier. Your poetry is always rich in vivid imagery and this one gives up much in the journey down the page. thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ]