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Subject: Re: The Tropics of Cancer and Capricorn | |
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] Date Posted: 22:04:05 01/02/08 Wed In reply to: Jess 's message, "The Tropics of Cancer and Capricorn" on 10:58:57 01/02/08 Wed Jess, Read this twice earlier (and of course before in the other forum). I think it works much better without the constraints you were trying to achieve earlier. Your poetry is always rich in vivid imagery and this one gives up much in the journey down the page. thanks, andy [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
[> Subject: Re: The Tropics of Cancer and Capricorn | |
Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 00:50:18 01/03/08 Thu Jess, I become your fan with this. Thumbs-up! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |