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Subject: Simpatico


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 05:23:17 01/04/08 Fri


eye in the sky
why do you whimper?
have you lost
your piece of sun?
stir the tides
so we can feel
the movement of water
over our feet so we can
remember that warmth
doesn't always come from flames
unyielding was the night
when you wrangled with
the corks of journey bottles
of soul to soul messages
sealing little word rivers
clutch your sky and sit with me, eye
tell me stories from the days of
starlight, and fires by the waterline
we will laugh seeds
we can cry music
and i will embrace your
reflection



~Lily

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Author:
Arunansu
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Date Posted: 05:48:52 01/04/08 Fri

Brilliant one, Lily. Loved the images.

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[> Subject: Re: Simpatico


Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 06:22:00 01/04/08 Fri



You have a gift for writing one line
that say's what a whole page often
falls short of.

Nice poem!

Nice thoughts that linger after the
readings done.

smiles,
andy

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[> Subject: Re: Simpatico


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 12:14:29 01/04/08 Fri

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clutch your sky and sit with me, eye
tell me stories from the days of
starlight, and fires by the waterline
we will laugh seeds
we can cry music
and i will embrace your
reflection
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~ ohhhhh I love that!!!!

and I'd love to be sitting with you by the fire, listening to those stories, laughing seeds and crying music
I embrace her refection whenever I see it

absolutely stunning, dear Kelle belle....

I'll be back to this in a little bit...


*hugs*

Sash xx



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[> Subject: Re: Simpatico


Author:
Mick
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Date Posted: 12:44:08 01/04/08 Fri

enjoyed the images stirred by your words.

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[> Subject: Re: Simpatico


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 13:58:17 01/04/08 Fri



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CONGRATULATIONS on this most deserved award, dear Lily

simply stunning, dear poetess


your poem now hangs proudly in

Muse Mongers Hall of Fame!!!



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*hugs*

Sash xx


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[> Subject: Re: Simpatico


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 11:14:45 01/05/08 Sat

countless thanks Arunansu...

ah andy, that's a lovely thing to be told, thank you berry much..

Sasha, my fellow moon bather, thanks so much dearheart.. you make my poetic journey a gargantuan pleasure..

much appreciation for reading me Mick..

love,
~Lily

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[> Subject: Re: Simpatico


Author:
Good Knight
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Date Posted: 14:26:44 01/05/08 Sat

Applause presented for this grand style of poetry

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[> Subject: Re: Simpatico


Author:
Bobby
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Date Posted: 15:33:49 01/05/08 Sat

Great to be reading you again Kel.
This is a great read, full of emotion
and great use of the language, enjoyed!!
especially...

"unyielding was the night
when you wrangled with
the corks of journey bottles
of soul to soul messages
sealing little word rivers"

Smiles!
Bobby

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[> Subject: Re: Simpatico


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 06:01:14 01/06/08 Sun

thank you muchly Good Knight, nice to see you here..

you picked out the part i don't like lol -- thanks and smiles right backatcha Bobby..

~Lily

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[> Subject: Re: Simpatico


Author:
Paul
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Date Posted: 15:59:02 01/07/08 Mon

Kel, I ain't quoting nuffing! So there!! Cos to me there is no one part that exists without the other. This is stunning. You speak to the core of me and I am greatful.

Truly a fab piece from you my friend,


Love and hugs,

Paul.

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[> Subject: Re: Simpatico


Author:
Bobby
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Date Posted: 18:16:09 01/07/08 Mon

Back for another dive into...
so can relate to these lines,
wonderful stuff Kelle

Huggers
Bobby

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[> Subject: Re: Simpatico


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 05:18:00 01/08/08 Tue

you're so good to me pauly.. thank youuuuuuuu

hey bobby, thanks for double dipping.. lol


~Lily

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Author:
the staff (Poet of the Month)
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Date Posted: 08:54:29 01/11/08 Fri





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You Have Been Chosen By
Our Members As
The Muse Mongers Motel
Poet of the Month


Please Select Three Poems
and submit by email
to musemongersmotel@yahoo.com
To Be Displayed in the Lobby
for the coming month.




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[> Subject: Re: Simpatico


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 18:54:04 01/11/08 Fri

tis a wonderful honour kind-heart, thank you so much!

:)

~Lily
(getting sleepy, sleepy)

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