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] Date Posted: 05:23:17 01/04/08 Fri eye in the sky why do you whimper? have you lost your piece of sun? stir the tides so we can feel the movement of water over our feet so we can remember that warmth doesn't always come from flames unyielding was the night when you wrangled with the corks of journey bottles of soul to soul messages sealing little word rivers clutch your sky and sit with me, eye tell me stories from the days of starlight, and fires by the waterline we will laugh seeds we can cry music and i will embrace your reflection ~Lily [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 05:48:52 01/04/08 Fri Brilliant one, Lily. Loved the images. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 06:22:00 01/04/08 Fri You have a gift for writing one line that say's what a whole page often falls short of. Nice poem! Nice thoughts that linger after the readings done. smiles, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:14:29 01/04/08 Fri ![]() Quote: _____________________________________ clutch your sky and sit with me, eye tell me stories from the days of starlight, and fires by the waterline we will laugh seeds we can cry music and i will embrace your reflection _____________________________________ ~ ohhhhh I love that!!!! and I'd love to be sitting with you by the fire, listening to those stories, laughing seeds and crying music I embrace her refection whenever I see it absolutely stunning, dear Kelle belle.... I'll be back to this in a little bit... *hugs* Sash xx . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mick [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:44:08 01/04/08 Fri enjoyed the images stirred by your words. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13:58:17 01/04/08 Fri ![]() CONGRATULATIONS on this most deserved award, dear Lily simply stunning, dear poetess your poem now hangs proudly in Muse Mongers Hall of Fame!!! ![]() *hugs* Sash xx ![]() . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Lily [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 11:14:45 01/05/08 Sat countless thanks Arunansu... ah andy, that's a lovely thing to be told, thank you berry much.. Sasha, my fellow moon bather, thanks so much dearheart.. you make my poetic journey a gargantuan pleasure.. much appreciation for reading me Mick.. love, ~Lily [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Good Knight [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:26:44 01/05/08 Sat Applause presented for this grand style of poetry [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Bobby [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 15:33:49 01/05/08 Sat Great to be reading you again Kel. This is a great read, full of emotion and great use of the language, enjoyed!! especially... "unyielding was the night when you wrangled with the corks of journey bottles of soul to soul messages sealing little word rivers" Smiles! Bobby [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Lily [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 06:01:14 01/06/08 Sun thank you muchly Good Knight, nice to see you here.. you picked out the part i don't like lol -- thanks and smiles right backatcha Bobby.. ~Lily [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 15:59:02 01/07/08 Mon Kel, I ain't quoting nuffing! So there!! Cos to me there is no one part that exists without the other. This is stunning. You speak to the core of me and I am greatful. Truly a fab piece from you my friend, Love and hugs, Paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Bobby [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:16:09 01/07/08 Mon Back for another dive into... so can relate to these lines, wonderful stuff Kelle Huggers Bobby [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Lily [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 05:18:00 01/08/08 Tue you're so good to me pauly.. thank youuuuuuuu hey bobby, thanks for double dipping.. lol ~Lily [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: the staff (Poet of the Month) [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 08:54:29 01/11/08 Fri ![]() You Have Been Chosen By Our Members As The Muse Mongers Motel Poet of the Month Please Select Three Poems and submit by email to musemongersmotel@yahoo.com To Be Displayed in the Lobby for the coming month. ![]() [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Lily [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:54:04 01/11/08 Fri tis a wonderful honour kind-heart, thank you so much! :) ~Lily (getting sleepy, sleepy) [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |