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] Date Posted: 06:35:23 01/11/08 Fri the boats sleep on the beach oblivious to sea curious by the aft and port quiet sand had no memory but full in the belly of deep place bury the marbled sky nomadic peered over shoulders on the pass by to forgotten few stood where he now stands morning beds the evening he burns in his stilled but lofty was easy love was blood with wings apocalytic from the leaves under sage winds he was everything undulating behind mythic eyes no blue in the rocks only soft knives that bend for siren through the soul chambers dragons pulsate of red vein tame they knew of what slept curled and eurythmic on night water so long in time stars laid with the grass ripe and untouched and every now and then her desire would brush in her mate move she left her soft for him hymned and chorused behind crow eyes for he was mercurial in his invisible and flowers were shy too much has passed with every song sung hushed in olympus but he never knew lost always absolute he moved loined with her scent the breaker part the fallen art the shapen shard [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 06:42:02 01/11/08 Fri To be honest I got lost in this poem that I don't fully understand but I was lost in the master of a pen. DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Good Knight [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 09:07:38 01/11/08 Fri As always the fantastic word-work of golden edged poetry,leafed in waves of beauty, bountiful flow and ebb of master-scribing rhetorically obtuse and thought provoking GK [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 11:20:50 01/11/08 Fri Bagger, What a treat in the way you break the lines here! It highlights the poem in such an awesome way. Your poetry is so damn unique and well done that I could read what you leave here ten times and still feel like I am getting something more out of it. So much there for the taking. Hope all is well! best, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Bobby [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 16:57:58 01/11/08 Fri To the weilder of the whitest white gold! This is one of my all time faves from your pen my brother. Totally engrossing and amazing it is. So much to like here fine sir but I think I especially liked... "she left her soft for him hymned and chorused behind crow eyes for he was mercurial in his invisible and flowers were shy too much has passed with every song sung hushed in olympus" Thanks for the poetic journey through your muse. Smiles! Bobby Firestarter [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:36:42 01/11/08 Fri "love was blood with wings" ~ ohhh Bagz, hon, I love that!!! this poem held me from start to finish "under sage winds he was everything undulating behind mythic eyes" gorgeous!!! your poetry takes me away on this wave of beauty... I just love whatcha do *northside hugs* Sash xx  [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 04:41:58 01/12/08 Sat Bagger, Glad to see you have lost none of your originality and style. This is a testiment to you skill my friend. Brillient! Peace and hope, paul [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Stormheart [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 16:20:33 01/12/08 Sat Bagger! You always amaze me with your style and beauty in your pen! Amazing work that leaves me breathless...coming back again and again to find something new...Love it, as always! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Uullee [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 16:33:45 01/12/08 Sat I longtime love your writesay, manly......... will try to be more frequent [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Lily [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:55:16 01/12/08 Sat i'm with Good Knight, you pen is gilded, Wielder.. mucha beauty under your poet tree Bagger.. ~Lily [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |