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Subject: Re: Isleosvieycotu

Author:
andy

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Date Posted: 11:20:50 01/11/08 Fri
In reply to: Bagger Vance 's message, "Isleosvieycotu" on 06:35:23 01/11/08 Fri

Bagger,

What a treat in the way you break the lines here!

It highlights the poem in such an awesome way.

Your poetry is so damn unique and well done
that I could read what you leave here ten times
and still feel like I am getting something more
out of it. So much there for the taking.

Hope all is well!

best,
andy

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Bobby
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Date Posted: 16:57:58 01/11/08 Fri

To the weilder of the whitest white gold!

This is one of my all time faves from your pen my brother.
Totally engrossing and amazing it is. So much to like here fine sir but I think I especially liked...

"she left her soft for him
hymned and chorused
behind crow eyes

for he was mercurial
in his invisible
and flowers were shy

too much has passed
with every song sung
hushed in olympus"

Thanks for the poetic journey through your muse.

Smiles!
Bobby

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