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Subject: Re: Untitled, Unfinished

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andy

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Date Posted: 20:12:27 01/30/08 Wed
In reply to: Max Hardy 's message, "Untitled, Unfinished" on 10:10:51 01/30/08 Wed

Max,

I am really impressed with your poetry.
It has a certain essence to it
that lives beyond the read.

Much here for the taking.

thanks,
andy

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Author: Arunansu [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 00:09:18 01/31/08 Thu " Free from static faces dry and grey, afraid to be dropped and cracked, afraid even, to be afraid." -this is SUPERB, Max. I think of this as a soliloqy of the road, that we tread everyday. If I have got this right, yeah we see the stones, do not have the time or wish to look for cracks, or a smile. Cheers, Max. [ Post a Reply to This Message ]