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Subject: Re: Untitled, Unfinished

Author:
Arunansu

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Date Posted: 00:09:18 01/31/08 Thu
In reply to: Max Hardy 's message, "Untitled, Unfinished" on 10:10:51 01/30/08 Wed

"
Free from static faces
dry and grey,
afraid to be dropped and cracked,
afraid even, to be afraid."

-this is SUPERB, Max. I think of this as a soliloqy of the road, that we tread everyday. If I have got this right, yeah we see the stones, do not have the time or wish to look for cracks, or a smile.

Cheers, Max.

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[> Subject: Re: Untitled, Unfinished

Author:
darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 02:02:21 01/31/08 Thu

Hi Max

I see a man a well built 6ft shaven head but an unshaven face his eyes are red with tears he wears an old trench coat and he is an a big city walking against the tide of people but he is taking just one line with out moving out of the way of others so people are bouncing of his shoulders and torso and he is talking to him self and down his face runs tears

Graphic write

DSL

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