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Subject: The purple planet

Author:
Arunansu

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Date Posted: 02:03:36 01/31/08 Thu

Dearest,
I have spotted one purple globe

where moons light up
the firmament
in rare shades.

Just the right place for us!

We won�t trudge, there

we can float like swans, instead.

Passing hours will dip
under rose-tinted sands,

I shall hide
in your shyness.

Gentle gusts of air
heavy with aroma of jasmine,
will brush by
the feathery leaves, ivory flowers,

like deft strokes of a pianist

just the right-
oh, no!

That terrible ring tone!
�Hello, who is it?�

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[> Subject: Re: The purple planet
Author: andy [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 04:46:35 01/31/08 Thu Clever and caught me by surprise! Will be back to read again now that I know where it leads. thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: The purple planet
Author: darkerside of light [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 05:13:48 01/31/08 Thu Should I be laughing at such a good point DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: The purple planet
Author: Max Hardy [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 08:17:22 01/31/08 Thu Hello Arunansu Don't you just hate it when that happens. Was floating along on the wonderful whistfulness you were painting, my mind in that purple haze. Wonderful. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: The purple planet
Author: Sasha [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 16:37:55 01/31/08 Thu ~ I love how this one has the reader floating along in the romance of it all like a beautiful dream, only to be interrupted by an untimely phone call.. I echo Max in saying "don't ya hate when that happens?" he he well done, my Arun...there's is always a pleasant surprise when I read you hugs Sash xx . [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: The purple planet
Author: Arunansu [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 23:47:53 01/31/08 Thu Thanks everyone. [ Post a Reply to This Message ]