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Subject: Re: Fruitless


Author:
Paul
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Date Posted: 16:27:58 01/24/08 Thu
In reply to: Jessica 's message, "Fruitless" on 11:17:04 01/23/08 Wed

Wow, Images of the night and that surreal feel that lingers. You capture it well,

peace and love,

Paul.

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Author:
Arunansu
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Date Posted: 00:46:48 01/25/08 Fri

Jessica, the piece is moving to say the least. My favourite lines are :
"The darkest hours of morning are sleepless.
Cold on the left side,
Fevered by you on the right."

The feeling is very deep, intense. Read it, time and again.
Cheers.

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