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] Date Posted: 02:42:09 01/25/08 Fri  Clothes sticking to my skin, I face the sky palms outstretched. I feel heavy, like the trees that stand upright in the steady mizzle, crystal planets dropping off their slender twigs. On a day like this, seated slothfully in a corner frequent flashes pierce my firmament. Rumblings, platter of drops, and interspersed silence plays out the melody, that we once sang together. [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 03:19:57 01/25/08 Fri Arunansu, Your pen has been on fire lately, showing us many shades of your work. Very nice! Peace and hope, Paul [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 03:28:57 01/25/08 Fri Thank you. Inspired by a song written by Rabindranath Tagore , "Emono dine taare bola jai", which means "on a day like this, you may tell her". Its one of my favourites. Cheers. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 06:14:39 01/25/08 Fri A graphic and a strong image of man standing then sitting alone and in the end you know he's lost or missing some one so well put to the pen DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 07:26:24 01/25/08 Fri Thanks DSL. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: AnneMarie [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 07:44:06 01/26/08 Sat So wonderful and emotional...can feel the longing. Great write, thanks so much. Hugs, AnneMarie [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:33:19 01/26/08 Sat ~ a beautiful song of yearning, this is, Arun and that image is absolutely gorgeous a beautiful Sunday read, my friend *hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 23:14:36 01/26/08 Sat Thanks Anne, Sasha. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Jessica [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 08:58:14 01/27/08 Sun A beautiful, spare, intense work. I love it! Reminds me of Neruda "Tonight I can write the saddest lines". Lovely, lovely, Friend. Jess [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 05:55:31 01/28/08 Mon Thanks, Jessica. Cheers. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 07:21:31 01/28/08 Mon I am not sure how long you have been at this poetry thing but, I can tell you that your skills are special ones. Never deviate from your style and you will find that your poems take you to places that free the heart, mind, and soul; all the while bringing insight and rewards for those of us that read them. My opinion is simply what it appears to be; an opinion. That said, it isn't based on reading twenty poems. You are one of those people (and there are more here at the motel) who have the talent to write poems that lift off a page and expand with each passing word. thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 23:31:43 01/28/08 Mon Dear Andy, Its so kind of you to say this. Getting such praises from my fellow poets here is an honour, and an encouragement. Thank you, Arunansu [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 01:15:15 01/29/08 Tue Hello Arunansu Captured in each raindrop is a microcosm, and your words capture the immense beauty of a moment shared, then the thunderous darkness of the memory of that moment alone. Such life springs from this, just amazing. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 07:47:27 01/30/08 Wed Thanks, Max. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |