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] Date Posted: 09:23:14 01/28/08 Mon Her Moons Denouement Ah, her succinct instinct haemorrhages denial, Elementally raw, she, Carpathian hewn. Pale beauty shaded scarlet in alacritous, Humorous allegory of her wanton moon. Ah, her bridled burden a sullen mood constrained, Midst the tacit verve, she, in sated succour strewn. Ignominy the riddle of illicit names, Naked edged the carrion of her hollow tune. Ah, her frozen glow carves tears upon virgin lips, An echo bereft, she, breathless of amour’s swoon. Soul scarred and sewn, beating with their eternity, No warmth of life tonight to light her aching womb. (C) Max Hardy 2008 [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:20:12 01/28/08 Mon ~ ohhh wow!!!! dear Max, this is such a breathtaking piece of poetry I adored reading it out loud, and loved how I felt when reading it that bit probably didn't make sense..lol but anyway, I really enjoyed this one I'll be back... *hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 01:48:56 01/29/08 Tue Hello Sasha Wow from me too, so pleased that you enjoyed these words. Your visits are such a pleasure and an insiration. Thank you so much. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 15:08:05 01/28/08 Mon Max, I have to agree with Sasha 100%.Awesome wordplay, gives this piece such gravity and depth.I marvel at your skill my friend, Peace and hope, Paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 08:47:56 01/29/08 Tue Hello Paul Thanks for your praise on this piece, it's very much appreciated. I do enjoy word sounds and playing with them, it's the warped way my mind works..... Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 03:27:06 01/29/08 Tue Max, Your assonics here are just outstanding. I know about that Carpathian deal as some of my family resides in a Ukrainian village in those mountains. Wonderful poetry. Such essence to your voice that equates to beauty and a really nice sense of delivery. You are a treat to read for sure. thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 00:49:38 01/30/08 Wed Hello Andy That's a place in this world I do want to go and visit. In a few years when the kids are older we'll be taking a trip I feel. Thanks so much for you ear and eyes on these words, they are very much appreciated, and your wonderful comments are an inspiration. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |