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] Date Posted: 16:03:44 01/20/08 Sun "ask me what is the most important word in comedy?" "what is the most important word in comedy?" "timing!" from sky dome touch the dark glass muse worms' regal reign the kill that brings life fresh bouquets trophys of the day the way you are is the way you come far from that little sepia pages stir they want fingers to snake through so here you are again in the vines of the valley cradling you walk alongside little bartering the dream for quick wings but you didn't know no you didn't see heaven chastised you as leaves rustle with jealousy on the side and slow motion forgiveness as rain flickers in black and white for shelter glass ting as road side creates side shows and bruises a main event come lunch the place doesn't suit your life how wrong then it is your life that doesn't suit the place so no more touch of sky no less domes of glass dark and lab rats to tether you are here with soup make peace with fish and glass of wine ....that's never empty "forgive my lips for they find pleasures in the strangest places!" BV (c) Copyright 1.2008 All Rights Reserved [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 17:35:04 01/20/08 Sun "forgive my lips for they find pleasures in the strangest places!" ~ that right there, hints at more to come perhaps? there is so much about this one that I understand and can relate to especially over this past year...but I couldn't have penned it as wonderfully as this!!! I just love whatcha do, my dear dear friend *hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 09:05:02 01/21/08 Mon Bagger, Sensing some sort of misplacement here that is woven in your words and metaphors. In the end you bring the poem to a wonderful place. The point of acceptance! You rock, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13:28:28 01/21/08 Mon I love this never empty glass of wine.. it's so hopeful, promosing!! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mick [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 15:33:08 01/21/08 Mon your unique style elicits a unique perspective. much enjoyed. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Lily [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:25:28 01/21/08 Mon the kill that brings life fresh bouquets trophys of the day goijus poetry dear Bagger, sad the bartering of the dream for quick wings, but so fine with it's flavour and textures, makes me want to go walking through the vines :) ~Lily [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Good Knight [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:30:42 01/21/08 Mon "forgive my lips for they find pleasures in the strangest places!" I have always had that problem but with my........ timing is everything Bags wonderful poetry my friend [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 00:55:30 01/22/08 Tue Hello Bagger My pallete is sated with the subtle aromas of your imagery, contemplating the deep texture of the vine in this voyage of discovery. Pure vintage, a good year, and I loved every drop. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 05:30:02 01/23/08 Wed There's a new term in poetry it's to write a bagger Superb style and journey that will only end when bagger hangs up the pen not in my life time please. DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |