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Subject: Re: Edge of the cliff

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Jess

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Date Posted: 18:57:38 01/23/08 Wed
In reply to: Darkerside of light 's message, "Edge of the cliff" on 02:58:48 01/23/08 Wed

Well I like it quite well, but you could submit it to the Brand Spankin New 'Critique Cafe' (moderated by yours truly, plug plug plug :D ) and we can all add our two cents. Constructively and with love.

'Can I burst you just like a balloon?'

That line is golden, my friend.

Namaste!
Jess

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Author: darkerside of light [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 08:24:12 01/24/08 Thu Hi Jess I'll drop this one in and this would be the very first time i have ever let any of my poem up for critique so treat me very gently. thanking you DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ]