Re: Sunrise -- The Poetry Parlour

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Subject: Re: Sunrise
Author: Arunansu	[ Next Thread \| Previous Thread \| Next Message \| Previous Message ] Date Posted: 01:00:16 01/19/08 Sat In reply to: Max Hardy 's message, "Sunrise" on 11:20:09 01/18/08 Fri Max, I like this one. Very pretty. [ Next Thread \| Previous Thread \| Next Message \| Previous Message ]

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Author: andy [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 08:00:42 01/20/08 Sun Max, Read this a few times now. It grew on me. I feel like I feel like I picked up the rythm on the last read. I think much of your poetry would work really well vocalized. You do such a nice job with line breaks and assonics. thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ]