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] Date Posted: 17:43:30 01/07/08 Mon i've never been able to remember names but i've always known yours - even before we met on a winter evening 'midst laughter, joy, and a dinner party, while your car lay broken down in some empty parking lot. faces drift in and out of my periphery but yours was always front and center, like a light at the end of a dark tunnel, showing me the way while smiling my spirit and taking notes on the psychology of rewards and punishments when learning to love. dozens of people have touched my heart but you have always touched my soul, leaving fingerprints with little memories tucked away for all the days ahead, reminding me i'm capable of completing a crossword puzzle while mesmerized by the words from your lips. c. november 2007. [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Jessica [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:27:49 01/07/08 Mon Ooohhh, Kristen, I ADORE this poem, most most especially that last stanza. Exquisite, and I can't be effusive enough. Thank you for posting this! Jess [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Bobby [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:37:40 01/07/08 Mon I have to agree, this is superb. I felt so "at home" while reading it. This piece is going places and I will be back for another ride Flutter! Hugs! Bobby [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:41:41 01/07/08 Mon Kristen, I just read your poem twice in a row and have to tell you that I absolutely love it from start to finish. As a result I am tagging it with the award below and copying it to the Hall of Fame. Well Done! thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:27:28 01/07/08 Mon Absolutely outstanding Kristen, can truly hear your voice in this, and i jus love it. Congrats! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 04:49:08 01/08/08 Tue Fantastic pen DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Lily [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 05:15:37 01/08/08 Tue Kristen, i think i just got lost and might need a ride home :) wonderful pen girl, i just love this.. ~Lily [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Good Knight [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:19:28 01/08/08 Tue Amazing as I have said in the past you key in on a special place that is heart written.Kristen you have a winner here! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 17:06:56 01/08/08 Tue ~ Ohhhhh Kristy, hon, this is utterly gorgeous and so very award worthy!!!! your voice is so gentle and warm I adore this piece *hugs* Sash xx . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:40:26 01/13/08 Sun Read of the Day 14th January, 2008 Chosen by Janel CONGRATUATIONS on this honor, dear Kristen your poem now has the ROTD spotlight in MUSE MONGERS READ OF THE DAY!!! *hugs* Sash xx . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 23:27:17 01/13/08 Sun A great poem, Kristen. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: kristen. (aflutter!) [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 20:39:29 01/14/08 Mon jessica- thank you so much for reading! and for leaving such a beautiful reply! what a smile you've brought to my lips! dsl - thank you so much! bobby - you're praise means oodles to me -- i'm sure you know that! so you're comment really made me feel all joyful. thanx. :D andy - you honoring this piece really is an extraordinary thing for me. it made me sooo happy, you have no idea! so thanks -- and so much more for that. :) janel - special thanks to you too, for highlighting this piece, and honoring it with rotd. that really did make my day to today. lily - lost lily? well, don't ask me for directions, i'm still searching my way home after reading your stuff! haha, thanks, lots. :) good knight - yes, you've elevated this piece for me before, and you're enjoyment of it puts a beautiful constellation of gratitude in my sky. thank youuu. sash - my muse is still on the run, but your encouragement is so helpful, thank you for always being a great supporter of my lil' ink stains. :) arun - thank you! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |