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] Date Posted: 01:21:06 01/12/08 Sat Purloined corpses dragged from Cemetries. Morgues. Funeral pyres Half a dozen hands, working under me used to shepherd the bones through stages of de-fleshing. Drying. Whole Price : Dollar forty five for secret dealers they wired pieces together, painted on medical diagrams, sawed away sections on skulls. One day, one fateful day, I got hold of the cold body; my youngest son,15 yeared . . . ( there was special prize for child bodies, you know!) I saw ‘death’, the ‘first’ time, and . . . The day after, Law keepers furnished the following details Name : so and so Age : around 50 years Cause of death : Unknown so far. (Investigations are on.) Occupation : Keeper of the Village cemetery. Now my eldest son works in my place. [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 02:10:52 01/12/08 Sat Last night I went to the cinema and whatched I am Legend where I was skipping around like a kangaroo on a speed drugs. It's about 10 in the morning after i just read this great poem of visual and technical pen .......I'm under the bed and I'm staying there telly tubbies any one how about Noddy! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 02:34:59 01/12/08 Sat ~ this would be a perfect piece for our Room Under the Stairs which is our forum for dark poetry a macabre piece, for sure *hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 02:44:15 01/12/08 Sat Thanks for the appreciation, DSL. Sasha, if you like you may move the piece to the said room. I had a long wish to write something about skeletons. Just came out today. Cheers. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 03:41:51 01/12/08 Sat Arunansu, I agree with Sasha, that perhaps the dark forum is the place for this, but you did it so well, maybe you should write more and make that forum a place to visit too. I love the way you create atmosphere and yet leave us asking questions. Laughing at DSL too....you can come out now Mark!!! LOL Peace and hope, Paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 04:35:11 01/12/08 Sat Thanks, Paul. I intend to write poetry of different flavours. I havn't visited your dark forum as yet. Cheers. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Good Knight [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 06:46:32 01/12/08 Sat Exceptional and deep with dark color....through and through Arunansu [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 07:08:42 01/12/08 Sat Thank you so much, Good Knight. Cheers. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:07:43 01/12/08 Sat Your ability to effectively write poetry in fragmented sentences that seem to expand the mind is truly admirable. I enjoy how you go after a subject and keep on digging into it until it is fully expressed. Well done! It should have been placed in "The Room Under the Stairs" but, it's fine to leave here. A, Take some time at some point and visit the other rooms. "The Room Under the Stairs" is specifically meant for Dark Poetry. It doesn't mean that you have to place every dark poem there but, if you are a regular contributor (and you seem to be that) it would help us out if you spread your poetry around. We like the rooms to stay active. I am becoming a fan of your poetry. I like the unique style and the depth of what you leave for us on the screen. Thanks Much, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:00:43 01/12/08 Sat Dear All, Dear RE, Skeletons are essential for medical studies, world wide. Wiithout skeletons, our Doctors wouldn't have been ale to cure us! Now the supply for the same used to come mostly from India till 1985, when our Government banned the export of skeletons. But the business has thrived worldwide, thanks to the lure of money and black market vendors. On one hand, you might find my poam 'inhuman', but on the flip side, it is essential for scientific studies. This poem emerged after reading an article on this. After all, it's a 'trade' too. So all is not dark, even if it seems to be. That's life, some business are essential, but may sound cruel and evil. Hope this helps. Thanks Andy, and all. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |