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Subject: Re: Trade

Author:
andy

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Date Posted: 12:07:43 01/12/08 Sat
In reply to: Arunansu 's message, "Trade" on 01:21:06 01/12/08 Sat

Your ability to effectively write poetry
in fragmented sentences that seem to expand
the mind is truly admirable.

I enjoy how you go after a subject and
keep on digging into it until it is fully
expressed.

Well done!

It should have been placed in "The Room Under
the Stairs" but, it's fine to leave here.

A,

Take some time at some point and visit the other
rooms. "The Room Under the Stairs" is specifically
meant for Dark Poetry. It doesn't mean that you
have to place every dark poem there but, if you
are a regular contributor (and you seem to be that)
it would help us out if you spread your poetry around.

We like the rooms to stay active.

I am becoming a fan of your poetry.
I like the unique style and the depth
of what you leave for us on the screen.

Thanks Much,
andy

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[> Subject: Re: Trade

Author:
Arunansu
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Date Posted: 21:00:43 01/12/08 Sat

Dear All,

Dear RE,

Skeletons are essential for medical studies, world wide. Wiithout skeletons, our Doctors wouldn't have been ale to cure us! Now the supply for the same used to come mostly from India till 1985, when our Government banned the export of skeletons. But the business has thrived worldwide, thanks to the lure of money and black market vendors. On one hand, you might find my poam 'inhuman', but on the flip side, it is essential for scientific studies. This poem emerged after reading an article on this. After all, it's a 'trade' too.

So all is not dark, even if it seems to be. That's life, some business are essential, but may sound cruel and evil.

Hope this helps.

Thanks Andy, and all.

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