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Subject: Alright Jade, I'll hold you to that promise. I'm sorry if my story doesn't make any sense right now (The next part's inside) but it will soon. Once Sarvin's introduced.


Author:
Sekin brightfall
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Date Posted: 01:17:40 11/03/03 Mon
In reply to: Jade
's message, "WAAAAAAAAAAAAH! **screams in terror** Sorry, Sek, no time 4 mine. Later, I promise." on 22:50:51 11/02/03 Sun

Grisen's body exploded with pain as he doubled over the hissing blade. Icy fire roaored in him like a whirlwind and he screamed. He couldn't stop it. Convulsing in spasms of wracking pain, he fell, still screaming onto the ground. The blade pierced upwards as he fell, but it was wrenched out of his flesh. Every pulse seemed to trigger another wave of agony, his vision swam in ruinous patterns, and he kept screaming until he thought he would burst.He clapped a hand over the hideous wound as he writhed and twisted midst the bones, but finally the scream died. The Shadowrider's face appeared over him.
His vision flared in time to the coursing waves of pain that rolled through him, her face was shrouded in blackness and only the poisoned sword was vividly clear. But the amusment in that slow drawling voice was too hideous to be mistaken. "Carelessness...That is the undoing of so many of your kind...So many..."
Somewhere in that deep flood of pain, a spark of rage ignighted, the embers of the wrathful fire that had consumed him earlier. He gritted his teeth to keep from screaming and his fingers curled around the hilt of his sword. The Shadowrider leaned over him in intrest and the invisble wind drifted through her hair and cloak with a whisper similar to her hissing sword.
With the speed of the Falkhan, Grisen dredged up his reserves of strength through the swamp of agony and brought his sword arm up for a lightning swift jab. The blade sunk into the woman's chest, blossoming over her heart, and she recoiled, screaming a venomously shrill shriek like the lashing wind whistling through a jagged crevice. The scream seemed to intensify the pain and Grisen's arm fell limply to his side, the blade still locked in his fist. The Shadowrider fled into a house's shadow and abruptly her yell was cut off as she was swept away.

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Alright, alright, I know it stunk (NT)Sekin Brightfall03:58:19 11/06/03 Thu
**claps** I like your story! The descriptions are so good I almost feel like I'm living it! (NT)KiokoMaemiMitsu14:28:30 11/15/03 Sat
neat story! hey I'll take up yer det fer ya Jade! (NT)Bianca Seaswift14:53:21 12/27/03 Sat


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