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The Fire Side
Sit round the flippin fire an tell your stories an poems ta the members wot wot!
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Subject: *Sit in a corner and starts reading*


Author:
Talno Moonwhisp
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Date Posted: 20:12:23 07/13/03 Sun
*pulls out some strawberry cordial and sips it, and begins*

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Subject: A new Story!


Author:
Mystic the Roamer
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Date Posted: 17:11:59 07/10/03 Thu
"By the way, I'm writing a story, and it's coming along nicely except for one thing:I'm missing 5 characters. The slots are:
1)A female fox (good)
2)Her mate (also a good fox)
3A Dibbun fox (their son)
4)A white squirrel (good)
5)A female fox (evil)
If you're interested, post your name and what role you want. I'm sorry I can't give you anything, cuz I don't have any money. As soon as I get these chars, I can start putting chapters up! Thanks!"

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Subject: I need someone to hold martins sword in my book!


Author:
BreezeOhare
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Date Posted: 03:57:30 06/26/03 Thu
I need someone to be the Redwall warrior, you can not be a bird, bager, or any large beast, but you can be a large shrew, small hare, mouse, squirrel, small vole, small otter, but not a dibbun!
Please post your name & group, and what you would like from the market place (under 10 coins!).
Please post.

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Subject: My first story


Author:
Warthorn
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Date Posted: 00:07:48 07/11/03 Fri
Alright. This is the story I am in the process of writing. Read it if you want to. I will try to post a chapter a week.

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Subject: The bad guys for my story!


Author:
BreezeOhare
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Date Posted: 22:11:21 06/25/03 Wed
Okay one more thing for my story is the villain! (did I spell that right?) all you have to do is this, at the message subject just put down the name of the one you want to be my villain!
1 A insane wolf name Moonshade (he is afriad of the night)
2 A adder genral name Poisenteeth. (has a bunch of rats under his comand)
3 a ermine name Queen Sage (she is a dusty drown and green color)
4 a moniter named Royaltheif (its a female, and she is time crazy)
those are you choice pleasem post! i will tell you who the winner is on July 10!

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Subject: Who want's to be the bager lord in my story! post here


Author:
BreezeOhare
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Date Posted: 05:08:40 06/25/03 Wed
If you would like to be the Bager Lord in my story post here, please read the first chapter of my story BEFORE YOU POST! all the need to do is
put you name, group that you are in, weapon that you have
and what weapon you would like to have if you win.
On July 31st I will write down all your names and pull one out of a hat. I will post who is the winner here and I will send you the weapon of you choice IT HAS TO BE FROM
THE MARKET PLEASE! you can be male of female it don't mater to me. P.S. you have to be a Bager

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Subject: Abbot or Abess


Author:
BreezeOhare
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Date Posted: 05:17:44 06/25/03 Wed
I need a Abess or Abbot of Redwall for my story, you can be anytip of beast exept bager! If you would like to do this please do the following.
1 Read the first chapter of my story
2 post a message here and put these things, put your name,group,and what you would like from the market place,
and you can not be a DIBBUN. on July 10 I will draw a name out of a hat and I will post the winner here and give you your prize (the thing you want from the market place)
the prize can't be more then 10 coins Please

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Subject: Whiteye, where is your story? it didn't end up in the archives i did it? did u ever post an end to it?


Author:
Shyla
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Date Posted: 17:32:36 07/08/03 Tue

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Subject: To BreezeOhare & company


Author:
Stasis' player
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Date Posted: 08:48:05 07/01/03 Tue
Hey, I just want to apologize on behalf of the INSUers for that incident involving a certain "Johnny" at the battle board; I can assure you that the majority of INSUers are not so loose-tongued or ill-mannered.

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Subject: Okay, here's something nice I thought up...Redwallian Interviews!


Author:
Aliana/Demora/Skywing/Checkery
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Date Posted: 16:12:00 06/27/03 Fri
It's only partially out of character, as I am a human. I accompany Mekerian the otter to have interviews with Redwall characters. This one is an interview with Cluny the Scourge and is Mekerian's first time doing this.

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Subject: New Contest for my story!


Author:
BreezeOhare
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Date Posted: 19:39:59 07/05/03 Sat
Okay, I need a badger lord, Right! well here is a new contest for it, you make up a badger lord, here is what you do!
1 make a name.
2 tell me what group you are in.
3 Tell me what you would like from the market place (under 10 coins!)
4 have fun.

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Subject: *sighs* Here you go Whiteye...


Author:
Dakkan
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Date Posted: 23:56:19 06/27/03 Fri
This is for those who have been nagging me to write more. *pointed look at a blind weasel in the corner before continuing*
Anyway, this is just a short story I did for fun about the day that Martin dies at Redwall Abbey.
It's in the reply because I don't want to take up half the page with it.

Enjoy!

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Subject: The wolf asks, once more...


Author:
^#!Zach Uth Brightblade!#^
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Date Posted: 02:15:53 04/04/02 Thu
"Would anyone like to an, extremely odd story about a demented eagle I once knew?

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Subject: **walks in, crisom eyes shining insanely but is not really insane** Cover the dibbuns ears.


Author:
Luna Battlefur
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Date Posted: 01:31:00 05/22/03 Thu
Redwall in Texas
a/nFor beasts in texas its the story of redwall
and i copied it of off fanfiction.net....

Chapter 1:The vertically challenged Novice
Dramatis Personae

Matthias, mouse, heroic one



Abbot Morty, mouse, peaceful one



Sunflower, mouse, ladylike one



Methuselah, mouse, wise one



Basil Whitetaileddeer Jackrabbit, jackrabbit, comic one



Diligence, armadillo, gruff one



Jessie Mae Squirrel, squirrel, arboreal one



Sammy Bob Squirrel, squirrel, silent one



Ambrose Spike, porcupine, inebriated one



The Churchmice Family, mice, extra ones



Colin Beaver, beaver, effeminate one



Friar Hugo, culinary one



Foremole, mole, incomprehensible one



Assorted Brothers and Sisters, mice, just-to-take-up-dormitory-space ones



Redwall Dibbuns, assorted species, annoying ones



Warbeak Sparra, sparrow, violent one



King Bull Sparra, sparrow, tyrannical one



Skipper-of-Muskrats, muskrat, aquatically inclined one



Guopiw, (Guerilla Union of Possums in Woods), possums, argumentative ones



Martin, mouse, ghostly one



Cap'm Frost, owl, militaristic one







Cluny the Scourge, rat, evil one



Assorted rats, weasels, and skunks, stupid ones



Sela, fox, tricky one



Chickendog, fox, mean one



Asmodeus, rattlesnake, fanged one



It was the Summer of the Laterose. The sunlight dappled the leaf- covered forestfloor through the branches of the oak, ash, pine, sycamore, palm, mesquite, pecan, walnut, banana, artificially introduced kiawe trees from Hawai'i, Chinese plum, fir, sassafras, cyprus, giant African savanna Rafiki-trees...



Below the swayingcanopy lay the riches of the forest. Namely, thyme, woodbine, oregano, silanthro, jalapeno, coffee, rosemary, cloves, paprika, cumin, sage, parsley, cinnamon, the mysterious fajita seasoning, cardamom, peanuts, portobello mushrooms...



Just at the edge of the hazyplains stood Redwall Abbey, languishing in the duskyred sunset, glowing like a burnishedjewel in the rays of the settingsun. The southface of the abbeywall was covered by the type of ivy known as the Virginiacreeper. The cool of fall would turn the leaves into a cape of fieryhue, further adding glory to the name of Redwall Abbey.





Matthias the mouse wobbledcomically past the abbeycloisters with his basket. His oversized novicerobes were gathered in baggyfolds over his largesandals. He came to a suddenhalt.



"Hey, narrator, can ya stop combinin' every single adjective with its noun or verb inta one word? It's really gettin' on my nerves," Matthias called into the air. A group of abbeydwellers cast curious sidelongglances in his direction.



It's the Redwall writing style, so stop complaining!



"Complain, huh. Are you the one who's gotta go runnin' around the woods after a giant rattlesnake?"



Redwall Abbey Warriors are not supposed to complain about their duty! Now just get to the tapestry so you can be lectured by Abbot Morty!



Matthias grumbled, shifted his grip on the basket of Brazil nuts, and continued to teeter down the corridor.



"Where exactly am I goin' with these?"



It's just a plot device.



"And what exactly is a Brazil nut?"



Shhh! Here comes Abbot Morty!



Abbot Morty glided past, eyes wisely downcast, completely ignoringing Matthias. Matthias trod on the edge of his habit, tripped, and went tumbling cowl over tail.



Kabonk!



"You did that on purpose!" Matthias squawked.



Matthias, you are meant to squeak in dismay, not squawk.



Matthias clutched his aching nose with both paws. "I don't know how to squeak."



You're a mouse! You have to know how to squeak!



"You think I spend my spare time squeakin'?"



As the discussion took place, Abbot Morty continued his leisurely pace past the Abbey cloisters, not giving Matthias a second glance.



"You made me fall for nothin'!"



Darn it, Matthias! Quick! Run after him and fall down again!



Matthias scrambled to his footpaws, dashed headlong after the departing Abbot Morty, tripped, and performed a spectacular triple somersault down the corridor, landing directly at the feet of Abbot Morty!



"SQUEAK!"



Abbot Morty blinked curiously down at the prone Matthias. "'Squeak'?"



"Squeak!" Matthias confirmed.



Okay, Abbot Morty, you're on!



Abbot Morty sighed deeply, steadying Matthias as he clambered to his feet. "Oh, Matthias, Matthias, when will you learn to take life a little slower, to walk with dignity? How can you ever expect to enter our Order as a brother when you are always dashing about, grinning from ear to ear like a mad rabbit?"



"Erm...I could be the gym instructor?" Matthias ventured timidly.



Abbot Morty sighed again, even more deeply, and shook his head sadly. He was an elderly mouse, much experienced in the ways of mouselife. He open his mouth to deliver a sage lecture unto Matthias, but paused when the sight of the now vertical mouse met his eyes. He was gazing wordlessly at the great woven tapestry of Redwall, or more accurately, at the centerpiece, a weaving of a mouse in armor.



Your cue, Matthias.



Matthias...



Matthias!





Matthias! Snap out of it!





Abbot Morty waved a paw slowly before Matthias' face. "Helloooooo..."



Suddenly, by some freak of gravity, the long corridor rug rippled like a breaking wave and flipped Matthias's footpaws out from under him. He landed on his face!



Abbot Morty raised his eyebrows. "I've never seen the hall rug do that before."



"Owwww! That's the third time you've knocked me over!" Matthias yowled.



You're not supposed to be hypnotized until you meet Asmodeus. Now start telling Abbot Morty about how you want to be a warrior.



Matthias grumbled. "I'm callin' the police. It's character abuse, that's what."



Speak, whiskered one!



Matthias stared mournfully down at his footpaws. "I'm sorry, Father Abbot. It...it's just...I want to be like Martin the Warrior so much, Father Abbot! I can be all brave and heroic if I could just find his sword. Then I could fight and triumph for good. But, I know, wantin' things that aren't gonna happen is just wasting time. It's wrong, and I'm sorry."



That has got to be the cheesiest thing I've ever heard.



"You told me to speak!"



And that's the BEST you could do?! Gawd! Father Abbot, quick! Save the chapter!



Abbot Morty saluted. "Heeeeeeeere he comes to save the daaaaaay! You know that Mighty Mouse is on his waaaaaay!"



I believe I told you to SAVE the chapter, not make it worse!
Abbot Morty dropped his Mighty Mouse pose with utter dignity. "In other words, Matthias, we are a peaceful Order. We do not go around carving up vermin just for personal glory, as you seem to believe. However, when Cluny the Scourge shows up in the next chapter, I'm sure you'll mature."



Not exactly the most eloquent of speeches, but it works. You go, Abbot!



"Now, pick up those Brazil nuts and let's go eat!"



Matthias grinned, nodded, and followed Abbot Mortimer into the Great Hall, clutching an armload of Brazil nuts.



Hey! Hey! Where're you going? The chapter's not done yet! Come back!



Aw, come on, guys...



Fine! Go eat! I'l just go write about Cluny, then! Sheesh. If you give a mouse a cookie, he'll ask you for a double layered German choclate cake...

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Subject: Aha! A challenger to that hare poem.


Author:
Checkery
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Date Posted: 05:49:46 06/22/03 Sun
I said I'd make a poem of how great otters are!

The Best of Beasts

Otters are such powerful beasts,
We swim from morn till night,
Never there was an otter who drowned,
'Cause in water we're all right.

O wid a tail like a rudder an' a big fat muther,
I'm dangerous to any foe, or vermin foul an' low.
'Cause otters is an' otters are,
The best of beasts by far by far.

We're gentle with the little 'uns,
An' kind to ole mousewives,
Savin' drownin' moles an' such,
With splashless, quiet dives.

O wid a rudder for a tail, y'hear the vermin wail,
Us otters are strong as the day is long.
'Cause otters is an' otters are,
The best of beasts by far by far.

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Subject: Can I


Author:
BreezeOhare
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Date Posted: 03:06:01 06/20/03 Fri
Can I write a story about PennyOhare and post it here.
I could write a chapter a week then post it here!
And what time in Redwall history are we In, I need to know
Please
BreezeOhare Pater Of PennyOhare

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Subject: song


Author:
Rebecca Summerstream
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Date Posted: 22:37:21 06/18/03 Wed
She looks around shyly and smiles as she signs** I'm learning to speak, and recently Kibah taught me to sing, although I can't hear myself. I hope you like these songs!** She clasps her white paws and breaks out into two slow, melodious songs.**

Kor

A sable hill, gigantic, rampart-crowned
Stands gazing out across an azure sea
Under an azure sky, on whose dark ground
Impearled as 'gainst a floor of porphyry
Gleam marble temples white, and dazzling halls;
And tawny shadows fingered long are made
In fretted bars upon their ivory walls
By massy trees rpck-rooted in the shade
Like stony chislled pillars of the vault
With shaft and capital of black basalt
There slow forgotten days forever reap
The silent shadows counting out rich hours;
And no voice stirs; and all the marble towers
White, hot and soundless, ever burn and sleep.

A song of Aryador

In the vales of Aryador
By the woodlands inland shore
Green the lakeward bents and meads
Sloping down to murmurous reeds
That whisper in the dusk o'er Aryador.

Do you hear the many bells
Of the goat upon the fells
Where the valley tumbles downward from the pines?
Do you hear the blue woods moan
When the sun has gone alone
To hunt the mountain-shadows in the pines?

She is lost among the hills
And the uplands slowly fills
With the shadow-folk that murmer in the fern;
And still there are the bells
And the voices on the fells
While Eastward a few stars begin to burn.

Men are kindling tiny gleams
Far below by mountain-streams
Where they dwell among the beechwoods near the shore,
But the great woods on the height
Watch the waning western light
And whisper to the wind of things of yore.

When the valley was unknown,
And the waters roared alone,
And the shadow-folk danced downward all night,
When the Sun had fared abroad
Through great forests unexplored
And the woods were full of wandering beams of light.

Then were voices on the fells
And a sound of ghostly bells
And a march of shadow-people o'er the height.
In the mountains by the shore
In forgotten Aryador
There was dancing and was ringing;
There were shadow-people singing
Ancient songs of olden gods* of Aryador

*These are not the true God that the songs speak of, and I do not believe in many gods, but that's just the way the song goes.

**She smiles at them** Did you like it?

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Subject: The Story of Two Oares


Author:
Goldenpaw
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Date Posted: 18:47:07 06/14/03 Sat
I'm writing a story about something that has NOTHING to do with Redwall,if that's ok.Hope you all like it. ^_~

Part 1:The Stonebreaker

Chapter 1

"Cirania,"shouted Mrs. Dethunier,"Cirania,come in here now!You've been swimming in that lake for over an hour!Now come and help muffins.Your father will be coming home soon to pick up the things he wants to sell this afternoon, and we need muffins." "Well if we need muffins so badly,"replied Cirania from the edge of the lake,"then why we eat them in stead of selling them?Muffins are what bakers sell,not Oares." "Don't get smart with me,"snapped Mrs. Dethunier,"Your father may be a Oare,but he's a poor Oare disguesed as a poor merchant,and he needs to sell as much as possible." "That's fine with me," called Cirania to her mother's retreating back,"As long as he doesn't sell my new Longethian dress!"She grabbed the towel she'd taken from the laundrey room and got out of the lake,wrapping the towel around her. It was a shame,she thought,that the children of the town weren't allowed to use magic at home,otherwise she would have cast a spell that sould instantly make her dry.She walked into the house,leaving a trail of wet footprints,up the stairs,into her bedroom and into her private bathroom,where she promptly closed the door.Five minutes later,she was swim suit-free,dry and dressed.She went to sit on her bed.Only thing was,there was something already sitting on it.

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Subject: ** She sits down on an empty stool, and pulls a hefty looking book from her haversack**


Author:
Rosemary Griffin
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Date Posted: 22:33:23 06/19/03 Thu
** She clears her throat quietly, not wanting to disturb the others sitting around the fire. She turns the pages of the tattered book, which is resting on her lap. She finds a story, and speaks softly** If anybeast want to hear a story about a mighty hedgehogs, you may come listen to this.

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Subject: My poem of a hare (sadly I'm not a hare!)


Author:
Juar
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Date Posted: 20:38:01 06/20/03 Fri
Oh So great is a hare
To what you think Oh contrare!
For what you say is not fair,
Theres nothing as great as a hare!

You may think all we like is to eat,
when we only wish to take a seat!
But an eating contest would be hard to beat,
Because a hare is all ready to eat!

So you say all we think of is we!
'Oh how vain are thee!'
When I never think of me,
We are so humble you see!

Oh so great is a hare
Will hop from here to there
Always looking so very fare!
Fore there's nothing as great as a hare!

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Subject: I'm starting a new type of Redwall writing...This one is called 'Mattoomeo', and it's just the introduction so everybeasy can see what it'll be like.


Author:
Checkery, adventurer of authors and quester of quills!
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Date Posted: 16:45:47 06/06/03 Fri
The noon sun beamed down on Florida the Hatchet, the badger who strode the western plains. Sun glinted off the double-headed hatchet slung over his shoulder. His home lay plundered behind him...there was nothing left.
Florida the Hatchet was after the fox.
Two days ago he had passed the fox and his bunch, who had given him a wide berth because of his great smell. Florida hadn't thought he'd left a clear trail back to his den, where his daughter Auma was. When he got home, he found it smashed and his daughter gone.
Florida the Hatchet was after the fox.

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Subject: I think I have something here. *All hares gather around*


Author:
Juar (I'm supposed to be a hare singing this)
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Date Posted: 00:30:16 06/05/03 Thu
Oh So great is a hare
To what you think Oh contrare!
For what you say is not fair,
Theres nothing as great as a hare!

You may think all we like is to eat,
when we only wish to take a seat!
But an eating contest would be hard to beat,
Because a hare is all ready to eat!

So you say all we think of is we!
'Oh how vain are thee!'
When I never think of me,
We are so humble you see!

Oh so great is a hare
Will hop from here to there
Always looking so very fare!
Fore there's nothing as great as a hare!

Applause for me! Sadly, I'm not a hare!

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Subject: Okay, I decided to put this up...It's a riddle of the way to The Castle; the whole thing's in a story I'm currently writing, located in Nor'east Mossflower. Anyway, without further delay, here it is.


Author:
Checkery/Demora
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Date Posted: 17:43:34 06/06/03 Fri
See the dawn break bright and clear,
Point your footpaws right of here.
One passing of the sun and moon,
And you'll be reaching danger soon,
Painted bodies gaurd the trees,
Dark in shadow, nobeast sees.
Travel until you reach the blue,
Innocent covering may fool you,
The teeth of blue could halt your quest,
Before you start to head northwest.
Steps of earth lead up to bed,
There, the sleeping rabbit's head
Rests on cushions made of stone,
Follow his right paw alone.
This perilous journey is not for the meek,
The brave will find the castle they seek.

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Subject: The Story of Moonmyst: A play


Author:
Lavena Moonmyst
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Date Posted: 18:25:38 05/26/03 Mon
This is a true story(not IRL). My parents are the main characters.

Main-Female Fox-Leira-?
Main-Male Fox-Morro-?
Evil Vermin-Female Fox-Trost-?
Redblood Leader-Female fox-Lest-?
Training Mistress-Female Vermin-Mhyrst-?
Nurse-Female Goodbeast-Lilila-?
Seer-Female Vermin-Aust-?
Lead Prisoner-Male Vermin-Bonfire-?
Other Prisoners-Male Vermin-(Choose names if you want)-?
Other Redblood Members-Female Vermin-(Choose names ifyou want)-?
King of Darkstar-Solo-Male Fox-?
Warrior-Ponderosa-Female Squirrel-?
Warrior-Kedro-Male Otter-?
Abbess-Crystal-Famale Goodbeast-?
Dibbun-Ellah-?
Dibbun-Matt-?
Dibbun-Ari-?
Orphan-Edsun-Male Vermin-?
Woodlander-Elin/Elinara-Goodbeast-?

Vermin just means vermin species.
I might add or subtract parts later.

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Subject: Startin' a play!


Author:
Kyaba Fleetfoot
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Date Posted: 00:34:10 05/26/03 Mon
These are the bally parts of the play.I'm workin' on the jolly old script.In the mean time,pick your parts,wot,wot!


Female(main)name-Thymeye
Male(co-main,squirrel)name-Oakleaf Treeswinger
Oakleaf's dad(squirrel)name-Elmpaw Treeswinger
Oakleaf's mom(squirrel)name-Firbranch Treeswinger
Friend#1(Male or female)Male name-Leoburt Female name-Lily
Friend#2(Male or female)Male name-Jod Female name-Jade
Abbess of Redwall name-Abbess Whillowharp
Cellarhog name-Nicholas DeSpikey
Skipper of Otters name-Longbar
Skip's crew-If you're an otter,use your own name ONLY if ye want
Badger Mother name-Mother Melania
Dibbun(Little Ones Against Elders *L.O.A.E.* leader,most annoying dibbun)name-Bubble
Dibbun(L.O.A.E. Vice leader,second most annoying dibbun)name-Periwinkle
Dibbun(L.O.A.E. Secretary,third most annoying dibbun)name-Poppyseed
Other L.O.A.E. members-Use your own name ONLY if ye want
Other Abbey Dwellers-Use your own name if ye want
Badger Lady(Long-lost daughter of Cregga Rose-eyes)name-Lady Kimliana Rose-eyes
Male(Long Patrol Colonel)name-Colonel Lanceleg
Female(Long Patrol General)name-General Dewleg
Long Patrol Hares-Use your own name ONLY if ye want
Male(Juskadain leader,weasle)name-Ferdor Dain Juskadain
Female(Ferdor's seer,fox)name-Vickwhip the Seer
Juskadain vermin-Use your own name ONLY if ye want

Hope ye all want enjoy the parts ye all jolly want and get,wot,wot!


Kyaba Fleetfoot ^_~


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Subject: My first story, hope you like it!


Author:
Tommo
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Date Posted: 18:05:36 06/05/03 Thu
Chapter one

Somewhere far away from Redwall, across the Ocean to another land.
This land was a huge place, filled with many creatures and it was a perfect medival world.
This place in particular was a land in the far west such as, if the redwall country was representing England this place would represent North America.
The country was called Dromica, and the town which this story took place was called Featherdown.

At the north of the town was a huge castle, with many rooms and secret areas, and the Otter King who owned the land and castle was named King Dromicuse the 24th


Now the story begins.


The king had woken from his sleep, and was all sweaty like the same 3 nights before.
That dream...That horrid dream that won't go away!
It's been plaquing him, he can't sleep a wink witout that dream.
He got up from his bed and put on his robe.
He walked down the corridor and without looking where he was going he ran into a young squirrelad.
'Oops, pardon me mi'lord I didn't know where I was goin' I got lost and bumped into you, are you alright sir?'
'Yes Squire I understand... this is the 6th blunder this season you have to be more careful' the king sighed.
'Oh yes, I still don't know my way around the castle though, since I usually stay by the gates waiting orders for Sir Pietron.

The young squirrel was a clumsy Squire named Tofel who was assitant to The Hare knight Pietron.
He wished he was a knight someday, to protect the weak and poor from vermin attacks, Vermin have been around much lately these days.
The young lad ran off, hoping the king won't report to Pietron for that accident, apologising the whole time.

The king was still shooken by the dreams, 'The land being torn in half by a giant earthquake, lava coming out of the ground... creatures running in terror and a rat laughing.
A very evil rat whom he never encountered before, and wishing he never had to.'
But what did it all mean? a common rat couldn't have the power to tear apart the ground, it probably didn't mean anything but still... it scared him.

Sir Pietron the knight, was waiting for Tofel by the pond and he wasn't pleased.
'Ahem! Sah, you are late..'
'Sorry sir, I got lost again'
'How can you ever think of being a knight if you can't even find yer way through the bloomin' castle!?'
The young squirrel lowered his head in shame... 'tell me what to do and I will obey'

'You will come with me to the village, and help me find a carpet for her royal bedroom floor'

He was talking about The princess Kurdiea who was the kings daughter, she was very pretty, and her Hare pawmaiden whom Pietron had a crush on asked him to buy a carpet for the princesses chamber floor.

The two of them walked out toward the village, and the market was full of creatures walking back and forth, there was the Inn, the tavern, the baker, the Bookstore, the Carpet stand, and many other buildings.

'Now don't touch anything, you are a very clumsy squire'
They were looking at Carpets and very beautiful ones too, the Hare knight was hoping that Dietrey the Princesses Hare Pawmaiden might like it so much, she would ask him out on a date.
Tofel pointed at a green rug hoping it may catch Pietron's attention, *The squirrel liked green himself, he had a green tunic and a green hat as well*
'No no no... Tofel the princess likes purple, that is her favorite colour. This one will be sufficent, Now pay for it Tofel here is 6 gold'

'Can't you just pay for it?' Tofel asked.
'the first part of being a squire is Discipline, you will have to follow my orders without question and you will get in the habit.'

They took the rug back to the castle, and hoping it will please the princess. Not knowing there was someone watching them from the shadows.

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Subject: My song


Author:
Rebecca Willowcreek of Noonvale
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Date Posted: 19:27:25 05/30/03 Fri
She blushes and signs shyly** I don't ever post here, but I finally decided to post up my song. I wrote it myself and I hope it's good. I can't sing out loud, but I sing it in my head.

‘Neath the Chestnut Tree

This is sung in a mournful tone, slow and a bit like Lord of the Rings music with words.

‘Neath the old chestnut tree,
I was listening for thee.
But all I heard were flying quail,
As the wind began to wail.

I was watching and listening
And as I began to sing,
The old song that used to bring you home,
I knew that you were meant to roam.

‘Neath the old chestnut tree,
I was listening for thee.
But all I heard were flying quail,
As the wind began to wail.

I waited years under that tree,
Waiting for one, and only thee.
And to this day I’m waiting there,
Waiting for one to touch my hair…

And say to me…
I’ve been waiting for thee…
But until that time comes…
I’ll wait ‘neath that chestnut tree.

‘Neath the old…chestnut tree…
I was listening…for thee…
But all I heard…were flying quail…
As the wind…began to wail…

I hope that someday you will find me,
Sitting ‘neath our old tree…
And you will say,
“I’ve come this day…”

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Subject: Ok I'm starting a story!


Author:
Whiteye
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Date Posted: 22:20:32 04/11/03 Fri
But I have to leave for church, :( so I'll start it on Saturday ( or around there) tata!

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Subject: Time to make a story from scratch! Remember these kinds of stories are always the best so listen up!


Author:
Juar
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Date Posted: 00:21:44 05/08/03 Thu

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Subject: Ooh! Ooh! I know! I know!


Author:
Demora
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Date Posted: 23:15:04 05/09/03 Fri
Sure, you could take part in the pass along story in the activities, but that's only one. And since I start stories and don't finish them soon enough for everyone's liking, we can have our own little pass along story here. :D That way, I'm not responisble for finishing my stories!

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Subject: Whoops! She skipped a chapter. IGNORE THE LAST POST, PEOPLES! She skipped the chapter about Cluny, so I'll give it to you.


Author:
Whiteye
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Date Posted: 00:09:48 05/28/03 Wed
The afternoon sun shone down on Cluny the Scourge! Cluny was coming!

The cart was drawn by a terrified horse! It was full of vicious vermin!

"Vamanos a Redwall!" Cluny roared insanely!

Some said Cluny was a Paraguyan rat! Others said he came from vast jungles across wide oceans! Nobeast knew for sure!

"Ah, senorita? Puedo hablar ingles ahora?" ("Er, miss? Can I speak English now?")

I never told you to speak Spanish!

"All right. On to Redwaaaaall!"

Cluny was a one-eyed rat! He had lost his eye in a battle with a giant anchovy! Cluny had lost an eye! The anchovy had lost its life! Then the cart came to a screeching halt!

"Redwall? We're going to Redwall?" A rat in the vicinity squeaked.

Good grief, you squeak better than Matthias.

"Arr! Shutcher face! We're goin' to Redwall! Arr!"

"But...but...Chief! Them Redwallers, they're fearsome! They'll...they'll..."

"Arr! Cowardly rat! They'll what? Arr!"

The rat, Skullface, trembled like a leaf in the wind. "Chief...them Redwallers...they'll...they'll SING at us!"

...er...well, I guess that might make sense to a rat...

Skullface burst into tears. "Boohoohoo! Me ol' maw and paw used to tell me horrible stories 'bout that place! I heard one of them awful songs once, far in the distance! 'Welcome to the feast, you beast, I hope you trip and fall, I've got a fat grandpa, ha ha ha..."

Skullface! That's the wrong book!

"Don't yell at me! Nobeast likes me! Nobeast! Boohoohoo!"

"Aw, Skullface, we all like you, don't we, boys?" Cluny simpered.

"Yep, that's right, Chief!" The rats sniggered unpleasantly.

Skullface sniffled. "Thanks, guys, I feel so much bet...waaaaaaarrg!"

Cluny booted Skullface off the cart!

"Owwwwwwiiiieee!" Skullface wailed as he hurtled through the air!

"Heeheehoohoohaha! Tell the devil Cluny sent you, Skullface!" Cluny roared.

That wasn't very nice, Cluny.

"Arr! Shaddap! Arr!"

You tell me to shut up again and I'll turn you into a.a clam!

"Arr! Shaddap! Arr!"

Clam CHOWDER!

"Arr! Shaddap! Arr!"

With PARSLEY!

Cluny stopped in mid-chuckle, his single eye tearing up. "P-p- parsley?"

That's right, PARSLEY!

Cluny wailed and threw himself to the floor of the cart. "Noooo! My allergies! Not the parsley! Anything but the parsley!"

Then behave yourself, and stop killing off your poor rats!

Cluny sniffled, pulled himself to his feet, and roared, "On to Redwaaaaall! Arr! Arr!"

A signpost blew past, bearing the inscription, "Redwall Abbey, 15 miles"!

Cluny was a God of War!

"That's right, I'm Ares!" boasted Cluny proudly!

Cluny was coming nearer!

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Subject: Newbie Help me give me info


Author:
Kyle Kriete
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Date Posted: 02:45:34 05/25/03 Sun
:Walks over to a balcony and sits down sighs and says:
Man I wish some one could help me.

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Subject: I gotta a idea!


Author:
Friulla Goldtail Manytalents
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Date Posted: 11:32:35 05/08/03 Thu
How about I start a story and people add to it!

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