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Subject: I'm trying to write a non Redwall story. I'd appreciate your comments.........


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Freeda
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Date Posted: 13:02:59 02/07/04 Sat

The first thing that Hansen was aware of was the sudden and dramatic drop in the temperature of the room; as he gazed around him, he saw his breath fog out in white funnels before him. The cold seemed to engulf him. Something else occupied that room aswell; as Hansen stood in the doorway, he heard a soft, insistent rustling and scraping, such as an animal makes when it is trying to rise.

It stopped 'Just the wind' he thought as he crept cautiously towards the small table in the corner of the room. On the table Hansen spotted a book. It was leather bound with an inscription in faded gold writing. It said ' Longoas Infernos Fera ' Hansen repeated the words as he flicked through the pages of the old book. He had found what he was looking for. As he was about to leave the rustling and scraping started again. Hansen shivered. Suddenly the door opened as if by itself. A lone figure was standing in the door frame. It stared at Hansen, startled. "Who are you?" whispered Hansen as the figure came towards him....... TBC but I need your comments good and bad please!!!!!!!

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I like it so far! (NT)Steadykick14:29:36 02/07/04 Sat
Put it on my site too, please! (NT)Eowyn Tinuviel11:17:59 02/13/04 Fri
O.K! I can't write now though. I will soon! (NT)Freeda12:02:24 02/13/04 Fri


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