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Subject: Kinda a continuation.


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Dartpaw
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Date Posted: 00:48:23 12/30/02 Mon

As I was telling before, was about Cody who had gone to the Redwall world and was trying to find a way back, but he had traveled for a long time but never found the wise creature who could help him, and so he and his friends built a hut and they lived in it.
But anyway back in the real world.

Cody's family was heartbroken that he disappeared no-one knew where he went, or if he was okay or not, they assumed he was dead, and mourned for him for a long time, Cody's nephew Thomas, loved cody but hadn't seen him since he was very little.
He wondered where he could be, or if he died or not, many assumed he ran away (mostly the people who hated his perents)
But Thomas knew somehow that he was alive, not knowing he actually was but just a gut feeling he had.
He looked out the window and saw a shooting star, his parents were out for the night and he was all alone, being eleven and they knowing how mature he was they decided to let him stay home alone for the night.
He made a wish that he could someday see Cody.

He fell asleep, and when he woke up...

He was still in his bedroom, usually in the morning he could smell bacon and eggs for breakfast wafting from the other room, but nothing... which was supposed to happen every saturday morning.
He looked around the house and his parents weren't even there.
He hoped they didn't get into any traffic trouble.
He looked out the window and his house was lying in the middle of a forest! (How in the world!?)
He opened the front door and walked outside, he knew a forest couldn't have grown overnight, and no force could move his house without someone noticing...
He decided to check the radio in his room the news might tell something.
He went to the radio turned it on, but nothing... just static.
He walked outside again, and thought he saw a shadow against one of the trees, he ran inside and up to his room for he was pretty scared, and he hid under the covers whistling.

He heard someone enter the front hall... maybe hopefully it was his parents, he waited not knowing wether to be scared or happy, (he was kinda both, but more scared)
He heard footsteps coming up the stairs, and they sounded soft, as if someone was wearing furry slippers.
The door opened, and a giant mouse was standing in the doorway.
AHHH!!!! thomas screamed.
AAAHHHHH!!!! the mouse screamed.
The mouse ran out of the house...
Thomas grabbed a baseball bat and hid under the covers more.
He looked out the window and saw the mouse again and he was talking to someone, not knowing who, because he was out of view, but the mouse sounded scared.

The young human was too frightened to move, for he knew mice carried decieses (SP?) of sorts, probably even giant mice were even more deadly.
He heard footsteps again, he yelled 'go away!'
The footsteps stopped.
A voice yelled out, 'Are you woodlander or vermin!?'
'I'm a human!'
The voice yelled out again.
'There was only one human around and he left many seasons ago!'
'I am a human! and please don't hurt me!'
A mouse opened the door,
'We won't hurt you,' my name is Bonton decendent of the first abbot who met a human!.'
The other mouse behind him was shivering.
'Don't let him hurt me sir, that big stick looks mighty dangerous!'
'Quiet Bloomfield, he wouldn't hurt anyone humans are just a legend I thought, but my greatgrandfather said they were friendly... so...'
The young human got out from under the covers...
'There are other humans here?'
'Well... one, but that was a long time ago.'
Thomas decided that maybe that human was cody, and decided to be strong, first he would show them his house, and maybe they would do something nice in return.

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Go Dartpaw!! (NT)Southpaw07:59:06 01/01/03 Wed
Huh needs edgeogs in it!! (NT)Tangle16:53:22 01/01/03 Wed
Bump (NT)Bumper22:16:08 01/09/04 Fri
(In dibbun) Goo' stowy!! (In adult) Good story! (NT)Saih Darkeye12:16:54 01/10/04 Sat
I wrote this a long long time ago, It's a continuation to a previous story.... 'ahh I thought this went into the archives half a year ago and I have no desire to continue it. (Sorry but I have plans for another story *Which I will finish* (NT)Dartpaw23:02:45 01/10/04 Sat
Mmmmm.... *Eats it* Delicious! thank you, (NT)Dartpaw22:10:49 01/25/04 Sun


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