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Subject: INSIDE...


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Thessie
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Date Posted: 20:38:36 11/07/03 Fri
In reply to: Thespien Origami 's message, "story im working on... yeah i know, i cant write furries very well" on 17:55:38 11/03/03 Mon

Garra Keep was a tall, square tower built of dark gray stone, with odd shimmering bits. It was surrounded by a high wall of the same material, with a moat flowing ‘round. Sunlight glinting off the stones made the tower-fortress visible from quite a ways off.
Even when the creature in question has less-than-exceptional eyesight.
“Er, Lynstas, wot is that? Yew know, th’shiny thing over t’the west?”
A tall, graceful weasel cursed with an unpronounceable name rounded on her companion. “How many times must I tell you, my name is Lieaneysteas! Ignorant buffoon! Mindless eater of carrion! Despicable old relic! …Um, where do you mean, ‘shiny thing’?”
“Geez, cool it, Linny”” The buzzard hopped backwards, away from the irate mustelid. “Gimme a break, you know nobody kin ever git a beak round yore name!” Out of range of any kicks, punches, or painful blows Lieaneysteas might try to inflict upon him, Kort halted and preened, in an attempt to gain back some of his dignity. “Ah-ahem. Shiny thing on th’horizon, shiniest darn thing yew evah saw. Might I recommend getting’ p’raps a bit closer afore we tries havin’ a civ-ee-lized dis-cuss-ee-one about wotever it is. That cool with you, O mighty and fearless leader?”
Liean grinned, showing all of her very sharp, very white teeth. “Aye, that’s a good enough plan as any. But when we get there, I will do any planning for how we will invade, steal, conquer or plunder it.”
“Kyahyahyaaar! Good plan!” The buzzard sprang into the air. “I’ll go scout ahead!”
Liean nodded. “Right. Meet me back here by nightfall. Oh, and see if you can’t find something to eat- for me to eat,” she elaborated, noting the sly look in Kort’s eye. “No long-dead travelers for me!”
“Yore wish is me command, O beauteous and terrifying weasel lady!” He spread his wings wide and, after an ungainly hopping run, managed to launch himself into the late-afternoon sky.


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*grins* Looks like the guards are going to get some action now... don't stop! Keep goin'! (NT)Dakkan01:11:30 11/08/03 Sat


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