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Subject: What do you think of this?


Author:
Dartpaw
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Date Posted: 14:18:28 11/16/03 Sun

A poem I wrote a long time ago, ahem:


In Redwall abbey one fine day
Two dibbuns ddecided to go and play
They played and they played and played in the wood
But didn't come home like good dibbuns should
Blinny the boy mole
And Wugger the girl
Saw a shadow and stayed right still
The dibbuns were lost
And starving and cold
They wanted to come home
To the Redwall of old
They started to cry and heard a faint hush
They saw Mother Mellus with a big scrub brush
So if you're lost in the woods
Don't be happy or laugh
'cause you might run into Mellus who will give you a bath.

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Heehee! Nice! (NT)Jade21:41:42 11/17/03 Mon
Very nice, I wish I could write decent poetry... (NT)Dartpaw's non-existant sister, aka "a squirrel"03:57:05 12/03/03 Wed
You don't have to sound so down... I appreciate you just as much as Tommo and Tangle. But I've read your stories and they are pretty good. (NT)Dartpaw13:29:22 12/04/03 Thu
Sorry just the whole... Non existance thing made it sound like you were depressed or something. (NT)Dartpaw13:31:53 12/04/03 Thu
Nah, not depressed, just a little guilty I don't hang around here more often. I'm actually writing another story right now, so I'll be around... (NT)a squirrel22:29:25 12/04/03 Thu
Huh? I was talking to my sister. I won't say her name probably for the same reason she didn't either. (See you around) (NT)Dartpaw23:09:04 12/20/03 Sat
Hawhahaha!*A sand colored female hare with brown paws and ears laughs*Hahaha! Ma' Mellus givvin um a good scrubbin! Hahaha!* (NT)Steadykick18:10:02 12/29/03 Mon


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