Okay, I decided to put this up...It's a riddle of the way to The Castle; the whole thing's in a story I'm currently writing, located in Nor'east Mossflower. Anyway, without further delay, here it is. -- The Fire Side

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Subject: Okay, I decided to put this up...It's a riddle of the way to The Castle; the whole thing's in a story I'm currently writing, located in Nor'east Mossflower. Anyway, without further delay, here it is.

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Checkery/Demora
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Date Posted: 17:43:34 06/06/03 Fri

See the dawn break bright and clear,
Point your footpaws right of here.
One passing of the sun and moon,
And you'll be reaching danger soon,
Painted bodies gaurd the trees,
Dark in shadow, nobeast sees.
Travel until you reach the blue,
Innocent covering may fool you,
The teeth of blue could halt your quest,
Before you start to head northwest.
Steps of earth lead up to bed,
There, the sleeping rabbit's head
Rests on cushions made of stone,
Follow his right paw alone.
This perilous journey is not for the meek,
The brave will find the castle they seek.

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Well?? Any comments? A peek at somebeast's opinion maybe? (NT) Demora 04:24:42 06/15/03 Sun

Fweeda liked it!!!!!!!!! **claps loudly** (NT) Freeda 16:59:26 06/15/03 Sun

Wow! I really liked the imagery, it is very similar to Jacques' in it's descriptiveness and it's ability to give directions. Very good! At parts, it does seem almost like you copied, but it perfect for a Redwall fanfiction. (NT) Furrtil 01:48:45 06/17/03 Tue

Bally great! Better than any of my lame workings. (NT) Torleep 09:26:53 06/17/03 Tue

Cool, you are a great poet, like Furrtil said it is similar to Brian's (NT) Dartpaw 14:34:57 06/17/03 Tue