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Subject: Well....


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Shanola
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Date Posted: 17:54:25 08/14/02 Wed
In reply to: shrift 's message, "Inevitable (r)" on 13:09:27 08/14/02 Wed

This part?

Like the terror of knowing he was going to hit the tall boy on the bridge all those months ago, only worse, because now he knew the tall boy's name, birth date, shoe size, how he took his coffee, and how he always borrowed his father's aftershave when he planned to see Lana.

That part seems like a mental catalogue to me.*shrug* So there's really no need to say this, Lex had a mental catalogue of Clark. [expand on this?] separately. If you want to expand on it, it should be in the paragraph above, I think.

But, as always, it is your call.

=D

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shrift
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Date Posted: 21:01:38 08/14/02 Wed

That was sort of a mental note I left in for opinions. Because I felt like I'd covered it, but you never know. Thanks.

Anything else?

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