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Subject: 分行方面可以改善一下

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葛鴻雲
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Date Posted: 18:23:03 08/30/02 Fri
In reply to: 努力改掉「歌詞」的璇筠 's message, "貼詩" on 20:37:19 08/28/02 Wed

如這幾句：

>荒漠隱匿在太陽
>背後而蛙們在對唱
>新鮮的歌

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這種分行另有意思至少我認為...... nt by 昌 20:20:58 08/30/02 Fri

請教 -- 葛鴻雲, 21:32:23 08/30/02 Fri

Re: 請教 -- 嗯嗯, 08:33:46 08/31/02 Sat

呵呵，如何沒標點 -- 葛鴻雲, 04:47:48 09/01/02 Sun

哈哈哈哈真得意 -- 真名, 21:46:19 09/01/02 Sun

呵呵 -- 葛鴻雲, 00:24:10 09/02/02 Mon

Re: 請教 -- 噢噢, 19:36:23 09/01/02 Sun

冇乜好講 -- 譚, 21:20:50 09/01/02 Sun

譚先生好勁 -- 昌, 08:59:56 09/02/02 Mon

不如我又試下回應丫 -- 鄧鄧鄧鄧, 10:35:38 09/02/02 Mon

Re: 不如我又試下啦 -- 即係如果昌唔開心...., 11:18:10 09/02/02 Mon

我真係好鬼唔開心 -- 咁係咪有多杯雪糕? 呵, 小樺冇份 (唔打nt會俾人打), 07:30:49 09/03/02 Tue

請人食雪糕?..............咁似我的說話? -- 西灣河的失眠人, 05:21:40 09/04/02 Wed

點到即止吧葛鴻雲 16:16:56 09/02/02 Mon

詩 -- 無分對錯, 09:52:12 09/03/02 Tue

妖 -- 無分對錯, 22:54:27 09/03/02 Tue

故弄玄虛、自我膨脹至此，都可以做研究對象咯！ -- 甲乙丙, 03:39:39 09/04/02 Wed

只講一點 -- 其他的我想先不必回應了, 05:08:06 09/04/02 Wed
更正 -- 甲乙丙, 10:33:35 09/04/02 Wed

如果堅持以散文規範量度詩，就不要讀詩，不要寫詩！ -- 差勁的人有禍了 (NT), 17:56:41 09/04/02 Wed

將個別句子的回應一般化為文學理論去批評別人缺乏閱讀經驗 -- 不識蒙混過關就不要讀詩，不要寫詩，不要評詩, 21:11:50 09/04/02 Wed

相安無視?????? -- 不可視若無睹 nt, 21:47:40 09/04/02 Wed
而且, 化為文學理論就是 -- 你的武功吧 nt, 21:49:09 09/04/02 Wed

本已點到即止 -- 卻又殺出高人, 21:56:10 09/04/02 Wed

寫錯字想走？ (NT) -- 簡直懦夫......無內文, 01:30:40 09/05/02 Thu

自己不通語法就不要評論別人的語法 -- 就不要說話讓人家有機會笑, 21:51:52 09/04/02 Wed

嘩！皇帝的新詩！哈哈！頂唔順！頂唔順！ -- 甲乙丙, 22:47:51 09/04/02 Wed

我一直發言 -- 呵呵, 不過我不是中大的, 你鬧錯啦......, 01:28:54 09/05/02 Thu
關淫賤迎新營乜事? -- 胡扯減壓, 02:31:28 09/05/02 Thu