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Subject: 有詩的語言, 沒有詩的味道......

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聲明: 我路過, 不是中大的人.

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Date Posted: 09:43:16 09/06/02 Fri
In reply to: 葛鴻雲 's message, "點解冇人批架？？" on 06:20:12 09/06/02 Fri

葛鴻雲的努力, 大家有目共睹, 如何在一個層次
提升另一個層次, 是時間問題嗎? 不是. 其實是
觀念問題.

看過樓下一大堆留言, 善意或是惡意也沒有關係,
問題在於大家不同的詩觀. 高人一等的架勢大家
心照, 好詩壞詩大家各呼五次就打和. 一個成熟
詩人, 認為自己的詩是垃圾, 是一種尋找進步的
方法. 是一種看法. 覺得自己寫得很好, 認為自
己已經獲得部份人認同就行了, 這才是成熟的詩
人, 又是另一種看法.

譚先生界定論題是他精於思考的表現. 葛先生忽
略分行在誦讀時的節奏和語調, 詩歌配合詩人思
考過程的猶豫和徬徨, 感情在平凡語言中表露的
速度, 在詩的節奏, 語感, 情感和速度, 是葛先
生需要注意的.

無論大家認為我是偏幫還是公正, 詩, 還是詩.
各有所好, 各有所惡, 勸不來的.

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Subject	Author	Date
感謝你的批評	葛鴻雲	16:17:02 09/06/02 Fri
我真係唔得呀 -- sorry（請看這個）, 13:50:35 09/07/02 Sat 請怒我多嘴 -- 路人甲, 23:50:35 09/08/02 Sun 應該是"請恕我多嘴"，在這裡打錯字好像也會給人痛罵，算了，也不理得那麼多…… (NT) -- 路人甲, 23:52:26 09/08/02 Sun Re: 請恕我多嘴 -- 你誤讀了幾個地方, 02:35:54 09/09/02 Mon Re: 請恕我多嘴 -- 路人甲, 06:45:09 09/09/02 Mon 多嘴俾你睇 -- 關於錯字, 08:27:41 09/09/02 Mon 呢位小友 -- 你似乎搞錯左少少野, 15:56:05 09/09/02 Mon 唉 -- 正所謂君子誨人好倦, 16:46:41 09/09/02 Mon 若是真君子，誨人好倦，就不會說"唉"那麼晦氣 -- 路人甲, 09:29:31 09/10/02 Tue ok啦 -- ok啦, 11:45:29 09/10/02 Tue