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Date Posted: 23:50:33 11/06/03 Thu
Author: Ellie
Author Host/IP: dsl-203-113-192-91.VIC.netspace.net.au / 203.113.192.91
Subject: For Dudo

Here too there are many tracks
Along the Tidal River beach
The sea swells deep blue green
As far as sight can reach
Thousand of tiny scratchy trails
with l;ittle mounds of sand
Give evidence that some creatures
live well below the land.
'Toepincher' crabs
As delicate as shells
But if one should grab your toe
Then you will hear some yells.
Crazy mixed sand pattern
of many a sea bird's feet
Hard to tell which is which
But the world seems complete
When you track the trails
of wildlife there
And know that everyone
has their time of freedom
in the sea wind and the sun.

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Thanks for your poem.Dudo. an inspitarion.

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[> Re: For Dudo -- Dudo, 04:29:30 11/07/03 Fri (mxpp-p-144-138-188-124.prem.tmns.net.au/144.138.188.124)

Very evocative- I could almost smell the sea-breezes!!
(speaking of which- I am off to Adelaide for the w/end- first time in the "big smoke" for about 2 years!- hopefully I'll have time to be near a beach somewhere)
THANKyou, Ellie


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[> [> Re: For Dudo -- Susan, 09:29:43 11/07/03 Fri (CPE-144-137-209-232.sa.bigpond.net.au/144.137.209.232)

Great Ellie - I enjoyed that.

Belinda, have a great time in "the big smoke" - do you realise the pageant is on????? Town will be very busy.


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