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Date Posted: 13:03:19 05/06/02 Mon
Author: Rach
Subject: A player>>>
In reply to: Rach 's message, "Chapter Two" on 12:53:17 05/06/02 Mon

At this point, like I said, I'm focusing mainly on the dialog and the plot. I may go back later and add more action. As for character description I am still undecided if I'm going to add any at all, aside from personality traits. Because one of my friends wrote this story and she said the main character had brown hair but as a read the story I saw her with black. And other people who read it saw her as a blonde. So I figure this leaves the reader to decide what that character looks like.

I didn't notice that I never said Jorptin Trynt's full name at once. I'll go back and change it. I knew who he was so it didn't confuse me. But yes he is the President of Sarob.

SF-1s and Brawlers are space fighters. In fact that is what SF stands for.

I have a couple more comments for what you said but the bell just rang so I have to go.

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