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Date Posted: 14:04:44 04/04/02 Thu
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Nick at school
's message, "new bios off fun fun" on 08:47:31 04/04/02 Thu
Sophie's example of writing wasn't really much at all. I agree with Nick on the whole bounty hunter babysitting thing. Does everyone have to know a minimum of four martial arts? Can't they just know one extremely good? Whatsa DD4 destroyer? One of those military craft, from the movie I hadn't seen?
OH GOD! Proof that religion is crazy! I admit the holy smack down was funny as hell but, damn! A crazy old pastor who kills people who rob him... Wow. The poor box, where'd that come from? I wouldn't mind him playing as long as he didn't walk up to players and ask us if we've found god yet.
I believe Leo Tristan should stop trying to use his ' key. That ’ is annoying. OK wait a second, did I miss something? Read this, (When Leo turned 8, both his parents were killed in a drive-by shooting, and he was seriously injured. When Leo turned 18, he ran away from his parents, and assumed the life of a comedian.) Anybody see a problem with this picture? If he said foster parent's I'd be fine with it. DAMN ALL OF YOU APPLICANTS WHO GIVE US YOUR CREDITS INSTEAD OF AN EXAMPLE OF YOUR WRITING!!! Not all of us know how you write!! And it's up to us!!! To pick you!!! So stop being idiots and just write a freaking paragraph or two, or you'll never get in!!!!!!
I don't really like the Akira guy, cause it's a bit dry. Nothing caught my attention in his character. Reminds me of my first application before I quickly wrote my second (Cupid)
Assassain is spelt like THAT!!! Not Assian like Michiko said or Assasin like Jade Hallz said. How many people actually have ice blue eyes? I've been told that mine are ice blue. My entire last three generations of people in my family only have blue eyes. But I got ice ones.... Bounty hunter assassains! Anything wrong with this profile? To bounty hunt you must bring them alive for the money. To be an assassain you have to kill em for money. That is a contradiction! You got all your weapon specs wrong, like Nick said too. You know you can take a lesson from actors/writers (I don't necessarily mean me, or anybody on the board) Less is better. You don't have to detail everything vividly. (like gun specs?) Her examply of writing was horrible. I mean look at it, confusing, poor ghrammer (if that's how it's spelt), I didn't really understand her smartass comments, if there were any.
I guess Rudolph can play some of our reindeer games! He seems like a normal person... Not many of those around. How did you become a bounty hunter! Geez why not a security guard or something? With military training no one could ever steal sneakers while your on the job!
Err twins? Biz has a sister? Guess her mom forgot about that too eh. Seventy-Five-Million is alotta pocket money. Don't expect me to believe your not you =P heh. But in order to keep variety I will not stray to becoming a bounty hunter! I just hope no one meets you and believes you have an evil-you. I'm tired of those "I have a feeling about you, so I won't bring you in." phrases.
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