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Subject: Re: having been written

Author:
Jim AKA Rapid-Fire

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Date Posted: 05:59:00 07/23/02 Tue
Author Host/IP: NoHost/208.6.230.38
In reply to: streetx 's message, "having been written" on 22:46:14 07/22/02 Mon

Welcome Streetx, it has been a very long time since the PTO days, a very powerful re-entry............

WRITE ON!!

>he forgets theres tragedy written here
>in dillusion he forgets that he was
>seeing things never there until the mess
>that wrecked a perfectly well to do daylight
>dream.
>
>he forgets theres consumption hidden there
>infliction as an afterthought
>loss of balance only a moment
>to forget the tragedy that will ensue
>
>rises to the occasion this son. sun?
>and views the text in an angled second
>blacks out with a wall and he falls back into
>the design of temptation
>
>only forgiveness is given to those in repent
>and he forgets his condition when all is done
>he forgets he killed and only remembers dillusion
>a chemical moment to feel better in the morning
>
>and the cat and the cradle rest soon after
>all of these moments are pieced together
>and figured out and hated upon with fervour
>to never be like him
>
>to thinking and figuring to knowing
>little quirks and hatred present
>downers in progress knowing hes got
>half if not more of all of himself wrong
>
>and changing it all around in lie
>for an answer to those insecure moments
>never finding the riddle to answer
>to know the answer and know it right
>
>and all is left unresolved
>father dying in a moment of doubt
>and hes left alone to wonder
>when this all got so distant and out of hand.
>
>----------------
>as a side note... Jim and Hope... you both knew me
>years ago from the PTO chat. i think i was
>DarkRainPoet or whatever. owned BlackVelvetRain. in
>any event... i'd like to hear from you guys again...
>it's been awhile...
>
>email : p_hills@yahoo.com
>aim : streetxtian
>webpage : <a rel=nofollow target=_blank href="http://offcentre.net/exit">http://offcentre.net/exit</a>

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Re: having been written	Hope	22:36:43 07/23/02 Tue