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Date Posted: 10:28:36 08/02/02 Fri
Author: Gemini
Author Host/IP: webcacheB10a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.172
Subject: Re: An Elephant in the Shed!
In reply to: Raphaela 's message, "An Elephant in the Shed!" on 15:00:53 07/25/02 Thu

Hi Raphaela,
I really enjoyed this story of yours.
You have a very readable, but professional style.
I could see you as another JK Rowling, I much prefer your usage of language.
Two small crits -
1.I thought the title gave too much away.
2.Perhaps some children would find some of the words a bit difficult depending on the age group you are aiming for.
Your talent for writing knows no bounds.
Great stuff.

Gem.

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