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Chapter57

Author:
Angie

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Date Posted: 22:23:26 08/08/02 Thu

Jackie:*weakly*My baby

Jamal was still trying to get himself dressed and didnt really know what was going on.Des ran to Jackies side trying to help her up.
Des:We gotta get you to the hospital
Jackie:Hurry Des somethings wrong with my baby

At this point Jamal looks up.

Jamal:Oh my Go----

Catrina was totally upset at this point she picked up the first thing she saw and threw it at Jamal, which happened to be a lamp.Jamal was too busy trying to get to Jackie to see it coming and it knocked him right out.

Catrina thought it still didnt do him any justice as she ran down the stairs to catch up with Des who was just about to pull off to the hospital.

Des had tears streaming down her cheeks as she sped to the hospital

Des:I cant believe that bastard
Catrina:Hes so dead
Des:Jackie baby dont you worry you and the baby are going to be just fine

There was no response from Jackie.

Des:You hear me Jackie?

There was still no response.At this point Des was freaking out and just about ready to pull over.

Des:Oh my God Oh My God
Catrina:*yelling*Just drive faster Des!!!!!!

Catrina climbed into the backseat with Jackie.

Catrina:Jackie.....

Jackie stared up at Cat but didnt respond.Jackie if you can hear me blink for me please just do something Jackie Im so scared.

Jackie looked up at Cat her eyes wide opened and weakly blinked her eyes.

Cat:See your going to be fine and so is the baby you just wait Jackie and when this all over with Jamal is going to be dead

Cat kissed Jackie on the forhead and wiped the tears from her eyes.

When they finally made it to the hospital there was blood everywhere.The girls carried Jackie inside the hospital doors which was not an easy thing to do.

Des:*screaming*Please we need a doctor......

When everything was situated Jackie was put on a stretcher and rolled into the emergency room.All Cat and Des could do was wait and see.

Des called Jackies mom crying
Mrs.Carter:Deshone whats wrong

Des couldnt respond she just kept crying

Mrs.Carter:*yelling*Deshone whats wrong with my baby!!!!What happened.
Des:I dont know....I dont know were at the hospital..We went to Jamals and he had some girl there...The next thing I know Jackies on the floor and theres blood everywhere
Mrs.Cater:Deshone...What hospital are you at?
Des:Liberty
Mrs.Carter:Im on my way.

Des sat back down with Cat.

Catrina:Should we call the others?
Des:No...not yet...This is just too much
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Jamal sat on his bed still not believing what took place.His female companion Kelly was cleaning his face wich had a very large bump where the lamp hit him

Kelly:Are you okay
Jamal:Im fine....I need to get to the hospital
Kelly:I dont think Jackie or her friends would be happy to see you.
Jamal:Whatever.
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Krystina laid in her bed with the windows open letting the Summer heat come in.She heard a horn beep and when she looked out the window it was Lib she laughed to herself as she ran downstairs.

Krystina couldnt even lie she did miss Libs company, he was funny kinda sweet and so cute.She got in the car and tried to act mad.
Krystina:What?
Lib:I missed you and you missed me
Krystina:Lib Im going to be open with you ok
Lib:OK
Krystina:I did miss you and I guess I do like you cause when Im with you I forget about all my problems you know.
Lib:So whats the problem
Krystina:I think we moved just a little too fast and we got together for the wrong reasons.Ya know.I just want us to be friends again.You cool with that?
Lib:Yea its cool.
Krystina:Cool
Lib:So you wanna just cruise tonight?

Krystina turned to Lib and smiled

Krystina:Yea
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Ms.Carter got to the hospital quickly she saw Des and Cat sitting there covered in Jackies blood and burst into tears as she held the girls in her arms

Mrs.Carter:Wheres the doctor.....Oh God hows my baby?

She went to one of the nurses and asked about Jackies condition.All the nurse could do was tell her to wait untl the doctor came out.Mrs.Carter took a seat by the girls

Mrs.Carter:I cant believe this.I cant believe Jamal would do this........I cant believe that I might lose my babies

Mrs.Carter burried her head in her hands and sobbed to herself.The doctor came out shortly after.He told Mrs.Carter that Jackie was just fine but the baby was having respitory problems and had a 1 out of 10 chance of survival.She was allowed to see Jackie about 30 minutes later.

Jackie couldn't stop crying....

Jackie:My baby...What if I lose my baby?
Mrs.Carter:Baby don't think like that Gods not going to let that happen
Jackie:When do I get to see her?
Mrs.Carter:The doctor said tomorrow.
Jackie:Wheres Cat and Des?
Mrs.Carter:I sent them home..They were really tired..

Jackie started to tear up again

Jackie:They told you what Jamal did?

Mrs.Carter nodded her head

Jackie:I cant believe he would do that to me mama....How could he?
Mrs.Carter:I don't know honey.I don't know.But I'll tell you one thing, If I see him hes catching hell from me.

The next day Jackie and her mother were allowed to see the baby which Jackie named Symphony Cyan Cater.Jackie couldn't bare to see her baby hooked up to all the tubes ,it brought her to tears.
Jackie:Oh shes so tiny.Oh god look at my little baby........

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Re: Chapter57	Mel	14:04:43 08/17/02 Sat