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Date Posted: 14:40:16 03/29/03 Sat
Author: Chani
Author Host/IP: curie.noos.net / 212.198.0.93
Subject: Hey I made it finally!
In reply to: morgain 's message, "Review of the B/A selection: The College Years" on 10:46:52 03/24/03 Mon

It was very long, but I enjoyed this story.

First I have to say that I loved the first chapters! This beginning was great! I've always thought that the Cow isn't used enough in fanfictions.

The story was well built and the plot has been followed logically, though I think that Angel turning into human was too much sudden. Something doesn't fit in there.

The idea of the Huntsman was refreshing and quite plausible...I can see the CoW doing something like that! The character of Jackson King was really intriguing (I really liked the Huntsman/Slayer bond stuff...)and his encounter with Buffy...WoW!

I also liked the way Riley has been portayed and I enjoyed that the author went deeply into the Initiative stuff.

I liked that Angel had to deal with his new humanity and had to ajust to the changes...Actually I can't watch Ats well in France (they have aired the two first seasons with many missing episodes here!)so I haven't seen IWRY!).

As for the things I disliked....Too many characters who weren't necessary for the main plot IMO. The confusing ending doesn't fit in the whole story...I was really disappointed in the end...Above all I have been disappointed by the B/A ship! I expected more emotions, someting more intense and more romantic. The characterization was good except for Angel...

However I think it's a very good fic and I recommend it!

85/100

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