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Date Posted: 19:25:51 11/21/02 Thu
Author: Jade
Author Host/IP: inktomi3-nth.server.ntl.com / 62.253.32.6
Subject: Re: General Review & Discussion: Shinjitsu Wo Tsukamitore by Caroline Tremble
In reply to: KatLurkin 's message, "General Review & Discussion: Shinjitsu Wo Tsukamitore by Caroline Tremble" on 20:39:36 11/18/02 Mon

If you want one word to sum this story it, it has to be sweet. It's a lovely story, with a bit of drama mixing in nicely with the romance.

It was quite nice just having the three characters as the main focal point in the story. Although Xander's short appearance was welcome.

The only bad thing I would have to say is the author always refered to Tara as 'the blonde' or something similar which got on my nerves after awhile. Was it just me, but did Tara only have blonde hightlights for awhile in the show which grew out? And also Willow as 'The Hacker' also got a little tired.

But it was really nicly set out on the webpage, which makes good reading. I can't stand story's which are set on hard to read backgrounds and a difficult font. I like the way the title was explained at the end as well.

A very lovely story that was well paced, I give it a 95.

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[> And also.... -- Jade, 19:31:59 11/21/02 Thu (inktomi3-nth.server.ntl.com/62.253.32.6)


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