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Date Posted: 19:33:12 11/21/02 Thu
Author: Jade
Author Host/IP: inktomi3-nth.server.ntl.com / 62.253.32.6
Subject: And also....
In reply to: KatLurkin 's message, "General Review & Discussion: Shinjitsu Wo Tsukamitore by Caroline Tremble" on 20:39:36 11/18/02 Mon

Can I just thank Oz and Kat for a really great session.

I loved all of it, and I can't wait for the next session to start! I'll be there for sure.


Thanks again!

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[> Re: General Review & Discussion: Shinjitsu Wo Tsukamitore by Caroline Tremble -- Persephone, 05:04:55 11/24/02 Sun (blhg335ty8sk.bc.hsia.telus.net/66.183.197.50)

I'm actually here! Sorry I've dropped the ball so badly this session.. I've been going a bit crazy this term. It's strange being back in school after such a long break (a yaer and a half) and it took me a while to get back in the swing of things and re-learn everything I'd forgotten since my first two years of university and so I've been way, way behind all term.

Hmm.. I'm afraid that I really didn't think much of this
one.

The overuse of epithets (the blonde, the hacker, the read-head, etc) drove me bonkers as well.

I didn't find any of the characters to be in character. Xander was the worst. Willow finds herself in danger all the time. Of course Xander is going to worry about her, but on the show he's grown used to it and takes it in stride. He doesn't freak out after the fact as he did here.

The story lacked cohesion. The pacing was very strange, and the events didn't seem to flow together. A lot of it had me going "okay.. what was the point of that bit?" There's all sorts of little things that don't make any sense and remain unexplained. Like why in the world does Buffy try to hide the fact that her information came from Cordy? In the show, Cordy and Willow seem to be the only two characters who keep in any sort of contact (though they rarely talk), so why would Buffy think Willow would object to her talking to Cordy? And what was the point of mentioning the Ats gang at all? It serves no purpose that I can see.

Overall, it seemed to be a bit insiped. The characters were in great danger at times, but still the way the story was told there was nothing to make me catch my breath and fear for them. It was all oh, aren't isn't Willow reassuring poor scared Tara so cute.. and isn't Tara finding strength in her love and rescuing poor hurt Willow so adorable. There was no suspense.. so zing.

I love W/T.. it's the only ship I've ever really cared about in BtVS though I've enjoyed several others. In the show they had passion and deapth that I just can't see here.

Also, I really don't get the erasing Willow and Tara's history and having them meet in season six. There's no explanation of what happened in the proceeding years without Tara. Willow in this story is a pretty pitiful witch compared to the Willow we know these days.. so how in teh world did they defeat Glory in season five without her? Also, why is Willow still alone and pining after Oz? It's been two years since he left..

Overall I wasn't impressed with the treatment/portrayal of my two favorite characters. I give this one a 70.


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