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Date Posted: 10:52:55 11/26/02 Tue
Author: Chani
Author Host/IP: curie.noos.net / 212.198.0.93
Subject: Ok here we go....
In reply to: KatLurkin 's message, "General Review & Discussion: Shinjitsu Wo Tsukamitore by Caroline Tremble" on 20:39:36 11/18/02 Mon

First i found this story easy to read (a big plus after the previous one!), and the W/T ship very refreshing. Tara was touching, and i liked to get Willow's point of view when she realized her attraction for Tara. After all we didn't really know how she's dealt with her new found homosexuality. It was very interesting to be inside her mind.

However i found the constant use of substantives very very annoying! This lack of style, or rather this "heaviness" is a big "flat" for me. I like the fanfics well written and there, i was pretty disappointed. Besides, it was weird to have season 4 Willow in an alternate season 7, after Buffy's resurrection. I totally agree with Persephone about that incoherence in Willow's journey. How did she become such a powerful witch, able to bring back Buffy from death? Something is missing there.

And as for missing parts....Where was Spike? Buffy just mentions him once as someone possibly helpful, but i think it is odd we never hear from him in this story (i know it is a W/T fanfic!!!!)....

I'm sorry but i can go higher than 75

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[> Oops...I meant "I CAN'T go..." of course -- Chani, 11:01:05 11/26/02 Tue (curie.noos.net/212.198.0.93)

Now i go back to my papers which are waiting for to be marked!


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