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Date Posted: 10:02:26 09/18/02 Wed
Author: Kaylorin
Author Host/IP: pcp632159pcs.newhvn01.in.comcast.net / 68.53.200.184
Subject: Re: DISCUSSION: Destination Unknown by Yahtzee
In reply to: KatLurkin 's message, "DISCUSSION: Destination Unknown by Yahtzee" on 22:53:31 09/17/02 Tue

Destination Unknown: Strays slightly, but not beyond the fanfic scope. Knows the characters
very well, although again, stretching the scope to fit the ship IMHO. Original to me. Never
read a BG fic before. There is a back story to explain the action. Can't comment on the
spelling and grammer. A few clunky wheels. Naration is smooth.

Overall score: Very good / 80

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[> Re: DISCUSSION: Destination Unknown by Yahtzee -- KatLurkin, 22:07:55 09/20/02 Fri (pcp02303222pcs.manass01.va.comcast.net/68.52.163.61)

Destination Unknown*NEW*
Good story, interesting idea about the crystal, likeed the bonding between Giles and Buffy in England. Also like the interactions between Buffy and Angel, as well as Cordy and Angel

Downside, the ending where Buffy and Giles got together seemed a bit forced. I think it would have worked better is it has been allowed to develop slowly, this story could as easily have ended with an acknowledgement of changed feeling and desire. If not that, Giles could have shown a bit more of his Ripper side, dealing with Buffy.
Rating: 85


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