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Date Posted: 10:06:06 09/18/02 Wed
Author: Kaylorin
Author Host/IP: pcp632159pcs.newhvn01.in.comcast.net / 68.53.200.184
Subject: Re: DISCUSSION: Making the Wrong Things Right by Ozmandayus
In reply to: KatLurkin 's message, "DISCUSSION: Making the Wrong Things Right by Ozmandayus" on 22:57:50 09/17/02 Tue

Making the Wrong Things Right: Very much in the Buffyverse. Characters were wll written, although
there were a few discrepancies. My guess is it's original. Good back story. Everything fit. Again,
as far as spelling I have little to say, but even I found some mistakes in both grammer and spelling.
The progress of the story was extremely well done. Strong naration. I very much enjoyed reading this
one. Even got caught up in the story, which I have trouble with while reading different ships.

Overall score: Excellent / 90

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[> Re: DISCUSSION: Making the Wrong Things Right by Ozmandayus -- Chani, 12:59:27 09/21/02 Sat (curie.noos.net/212.198.0.93)

Good story, well written. I love the dialogues, often very funny. The characters ring true. However i missed the usual action, fights and fantastic events of the Buffyverse. It's like a perfect world, maybe too pink for me, but that works well. The storyline isn't conventional and doesn't sound "déjà vu". I found a lot of sensitivity in the narration, and enjoyed that. All the characters seems to be loved by the author, and he managed to find a way to give them a good bit (my English is awful, i'm sorry!). That's very nice.

Reading this story, i realized how much Oz must have been disappointed by the season 6. I recommend that fiction, even if in my heart i can't believe in that ship...sorry, because i can't see Buffy being in love with Xander but above all because i believe in X/W! Oh god, it's hard to read a fanfic based on a ship which refutes the ships i support!

Rating: very good 85/100


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