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Date Posted: 15:21:19 09/22/02 Sun
Author: Ozmandayus
Author Host/IP: cache-rk06.proxy.aol.com / 152.163.189.70
Subject: Re: DISCUSSION: Anywhere But Here by Sarah T
In reply to: KatLurkin 's message, "DISCUSSION: Anywhere But Here by Sarah T" on 23:00:45 09/17/02 Tue

I thought this was well written, but a bit boring for my tastes. The characterization was good but I just ddin't feel much as I read the story.

I give it a 80

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[> Re: DISCUSSION: Anywhere But Here by Sarah T -- morgain, 18:35:56 09/22/02 Sun (modemcable214.10-202-24.mtl.mc.videotron.ca/24.202.10.214)

Overall, I found this to be a solid story, but not particularly special. It had an interesting premise and attempted to extend the canon of the Buffyverse regarding Ethan Rayne and Giles’ past relationship with him. It also tried to address the lack of any real knowledge about Dawn’s status vis--vis being the Key.

But I did not find it believable at all that Dawn would run off with some strange older man after her encounter with Glory. I think she’d have more sense than that. So this stretched my credibility quite a bit.

Ethan was in character, but I found Dawn’s characterization quite bratty. I may be one of the few who thinks she had good reason to whine in S6, but this rendition of her made her surly and unpleasant. There was also a slight sexual undercurrent I found "icky".

Technically it was well written and the plot did flow well. However, I was unclear if it was Park who was following them or someone else. I would have liked a bit more detail about this. I would recommend this to someone who wanted to know more about the Ethan character, but with a caveat.

Overall rating: 70


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