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Date Posted: 18:39:58 10/22/02 Tue
Author: Jade
Author Host/IP: inktomi3-nth.server.ntl.com / 62.253.32.6
Subject: Re: General Review & Discussion: What She Deserves by Herself-B/S
In reply to: KatLurkin 's message, "General Review & Discussion: What She Deserves by Herself-B/S" on 17:03:02 10/21/02 Mon

I went to read this story, with as much an open mind as I could muster. I have read B/S fics in the past, and quite enjoyed them. I didn't really like this one.
It was very well written and everything, but I just couldn't really see it happening in my mind, which I think is important for a story.

I don't think Spike would let himself be 'raped' or 'tortured' by other men as the story went. He was a total wimp in this fic. I like Spike strong and fiesty, so this was a bad point for me.
And the way it kept saying he hated Buffy and suddenly was back in love with her.

I give it a 65, for being well written, but not plausible in my opinion.

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[> Re: General Review & Discussion: What She Deserves by Herself-B/S -- Bri, 02:51:55 10/23/02 Wed (cpe-66-1-253-227.co.sprintbbd.net/66.1.253.227)

Well, I started out not really liking this story at all. I intensely dislike m/m slash, although I can read it, and I completely can't stand BDSM, so the scenes with Spike and Jack just irked me. (Maybe it's because the whole time, I kept envisiong Jack as Jack McPhee, from Dawson's Creek. LOL) Plus, I was disgusted with Spike's pitiful, woe is me, I'm all tortured and melancholy and I want to play pseudo-Angel act.

However, once they got out of New York, I really started appreciating it more. The explanation for their actions was detailed, the story progressed reasonably well as far as speed and clarity, overall it was very well written. I believed the motives and the logic for both Buffy and Spike, and I could see exactly where they were coming from. Probably what I loved most about it was that even though it started off dark, it segued into something hopeful, but not completely sappy and with a contrived happy ending.

I'd like to rate it around an 80 because of my dislike of the m/m BDSM, but that would be detracting from the merits of the story based on personal bias. So, overall, I'd have to give it a 90.

Bri


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