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Date Posted: 21:01:15 10/26/02 Sat
Author: Doe
Author Host/IP: proxy.ia3.marketscore.com / 66.119.33.135
Subject: Re: General Review & Discussion: What She Deserves by Herself-B/S
In reply to: KatLurkin 's message, "General Review & Discussion: What She Deserves by Herself-B/S" on 17:03:02 10/21/02 Mon

This was a well-written story but Buffy and Spike just seemed too out of character for me.I just feel the author didn't give me a reason to believe that the characters would act in the manner they did.

My score 79

Doe

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[> Re: General Review & Discussion: What She Deserves by Herself-B/S -- JSlayerUK, 17:37:08 10/30/02 Wed (cache-loh-af06.proxy.aol.com/195.93.50.12)

This fic was interesting. See, I found it disturbing. It was a little ooky, but not in a good way. Out of character definately. But with the characters created, it was a good story. I think that on the whole the actual story telling was good. The problem was that it was meant to be fanfic, and one is meant to take the characters already portrayed as they are. This changed Buffy and Spike too much to make it based on the show. As a story in itself, ignoring the characterisations, it was very good. Interesting plot. Thorough and well thought out. I just think it fell back in a sense of "I could never see that happening".

I give it a 70.


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